Under the Sea Flash Challenge in Solaris | World Anvil

Under the Sea Flash Challenge

 
by Annie Stein
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Solaris is a soft science fiction webcomic set in our own universe, kind of. Learn more by continuing to read, or click here to be taken to the comic.
Q:Where am I?   You're still in the system known as Sol. Except this time each planet is habitable and developed its own life. The people are humanoid, mostly.
Q:I heard something about a comic?   Oh yes! The main comic is still in development, but you can read the first few pages of Little Blue if you click here.  
Q:What's going on?   Sol is invading. The resentful sun sends its angelic armies: the Scourge. For now, they're being held back at Mercury by Penumbra.
by Annie Stein
Winners of the Under the Sea Challenge
Generic article | Jun 15, 2023

Announcing the winners of the Under the Sea Challenge, which ran from the 19th-29th of May.

  In honor of #MerMay2023, and for an alternative event during Play May, Solaris is hosting a short one week flash challenge. The theme is Under the Sea, and I want to hear about your oceans, lake monsters, merfolk and anything related to bodies of water.  
Write an article that fits the theme Under the Sea. All templates are welcome. Entries are due by the 29th of May. Entries have now closed.
 

Judging

The entries will all be judged on three metrics.  
  • Creativity - Is it a inventive concept, or a particularly creative interpretation? Does the article tell us something interesting about the world?
  • Versimilitude - Is it believable? Does the article fit within the context of the world it is in?
  • Presentation - Is the article well structured? Is it easy to read? Is the theme the focus of the article? Is any context and related concepts presented clearly and succinctly?
Do you want to know how you scored? Opt in for feedback when you send in your entry, and we'll let you know your scores and give some short personalized feedback.

Prizes

  • 1st Place - An MS Paint illustration related to the article, and an MS paint illustration of your choice. Golden Badge*
  • 2nd Place - An MS Paint illustration related to the article. Silver Badge*
  • 3rd Place - An MS Paint illustration related to the article. Bronze Badge*
  • *These badges are graphics that will redirect to the winning article when clicked. Since this is an unofficial challenge the badge isn't added to your badges page on your author profile, but you can use the graphic yourself where you want to!

    How to Enter

      To enter the challenge write an article that fits the theme, and submit it by doing the steps below. When you submit you can opt in for public or private feedback, where I will let you know how you scored and why.   Make sure your article is complete when you submit your entry. It will be judged as soon as it's submitted and logged, so make sure you're as happy with it as can be!  
    1. Put the Under the Sea entry badge on your entry by using the bb code: [imgblock:4472209]. I recommend putting it in the sidebar or authors note, but you can put it wherever you want.
    2. Leave a comment on this article with a link to your entry. One of the judges will reply to let you know once it's logged and add it into the entries below.
     

    How to Opt in for Feedback

    When you comment with a link to your entry, say that you want feedback to opt in. The feedback will be left as a comment on the article, and it will include how you scored on a scale of one to ten for each of the metrics, and a short description of why. If you'd like it to be a private comment, please let us know when you opt in.
    Under the Sea Flash Challenge Entry
    This article is an entry to the unofficial Under the Sea Flash Challenge.

    To add this to your article use the BB code below
    [imgblock:4472209]
     

    Judges

    Sage nnie

    Annie Stein
       
    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris

     
     

    Annie Stein

      Annie Stein, also known as nnie, ran the first Unofficial Challenge back in 2021. She's the writer and artist behind Solaris, the world you are currently on, which was voted the Most Beautiful New World of 2022 and nominated for Best New World. Solaris is also the Summercamp 2022 winner of the Military Conflict with Operation War Dove.  
    Challenges are a great way to get new people to check out your work. Remember that they don't know all the things you do: look for a way to show new readers with what your world is all about!
    — Annie's Challenge Advice
     
    Under the Sea Inspiration
    Neptune
    Planet | Jul 21, 2023

    Hidden beneath the vicious storms of Neptune are continent-wide ice sheets and a vast and mysterious ocean. The planet is known for their dedication to the defence of the Kuiper Belt, but salacious tales of secret shrines to the same dark entities persist

     

    Qurilion

      Qurilion is a titan of World Anvil, he has won several Best Body Of Work during the WorldEmber events, and most recently the Strength and Honor Award during the Worldbuilding Awards. Not only is he the mastermind behind Araea, Shedim, Megacorpolis, and Necro-Industrial Complex, and many more amazing worlds, he is the person who inspired the Human of the Match award.
    I love using challenges to explore some aspect of the world I hadn't really thought about. It can really help you break out of the mold and focus something that might be way outside your wheelhouse. Embrace it - you'll find something there that you like.
    — Qurilion's Challenge Advice
    Under the Sea Inspiration
    The Abyss
    Geographic Location | Jun 18, 2019

    A vast ocean deep beneath the Surface, the Abyss is a world of black water and alien things from unfathomable depths.

     

    Entries





    Sage EmilyArmstrong

    Emily Armstrong
         
    Check out my worlds of Beckettville and Culinarypunk!

     


    Sage oaster2000

    Owen Davies
       
    "The world is only as big as one makes it. So make it bigger by expanding your mind."

     

    This article is a stub . It will be expanded upon later.

    Comments

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    EBelt
    Jacqueline Yang
    20 May, 2023 13:05

    This is my article I hope you like it!   god of the ocean depths   I opt for feedback.

    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    20 May, 2023 13:21

    Congrats on being the first! I've noted down your entry and we'll reply to your article with feedback once we're done with the judging!

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    20 May, 2023 18:09

    Hello there! Here is the first of 2 entries... If I can only submit one, please keep this one! I definitely opt in for feedback; I can use all the help I can get! :D  

    Tsuthar'Chor
    Generic article | May 20, 2023

    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    20 May, 2023 18:22

    I'll count this one as your entry then! I've logged it, and we'll reply to your article with your feedback once we're done judging. :D

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    20 May, 2023 18:12

    And here is the second! As mentioned, if I can only enter once, please disregard this one. I was inspired to write this short story whilst writing the first article, so they're both related. :D As before, feedback welcome to help me be less bad!  

    Story: Echoes from the Abyss
    Generic article | May 20, 2023

    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    20 May, 2023 18:30

    I'm thrilled you got inspired enough to write two articles! I won't be counting this one as an entry because I want to keep things fair, but I encourage anyone reading the comments to check it out and share some love!

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    21 May, 2023 19:18

    First time participating in an unofficial flash challenge. Here is my article: I opt in for feedback.

    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    22 May, 2023 07:50

    I'm glad to hear you're giving it a try! I've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with your feedback when we're done judging.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    22 May, 2023 03:55
    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    22 May, 2023 07:51

    Hello! Thanks for entering, I've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with your feedback when we're done judging.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    22 May, 2023 11:28

    My entry

    Shadow Sea Monster
    Species | May 22, 2023

    Sea-dwelling counterparts of monsters from the Shadow Forest

    I would like feedback

    Check out the worlds of Terra Nova and Magic Earth
    If you are looking for my Summer Camp articles check Terra Nova or My Summer Camp Progress Page
    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    22 May, 2023 16:00

    Best of luck! I've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with your feedback when we're done judging.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    22 May, 2023 11:30

    Here's my entry :)   https://www.worldanvil.com/w/frontier-cape-broccoli/a/taravana-condition   I Opt in for feedback

    Check out the world of the Six-Globe and it's associated campaign; Frontier!
    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    22 May, 2023 16:00

    Best of luck! I've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with your feedback when we're done judging.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    22 May, 2023 16:58

    Thanks for the great challenge. I had the idea and the drawing ready for a long time, but I was still waiting for the right moment for an article. I would be very happy about feedback. Have a nice day.  

    Qimiori - Water Forests
    Geographic Location | May 22, 2023

    Stay imaginative and feel free to browse through my worlds Blue´s Worlds - Elaqitan - Naharin.
    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    23 May, 2023 06:13

    I'm glad you found the moment! I've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with your feedback when we're done judging.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    Grandmaster Tanai
    Tanai Cuinsear
    22 May, 2023 21:07

    Nice challenge. Gave me a reason to start working on a settlement I've meant to write for a while. https://www.worldanvil.com/w/tremanac-tanai/a/earvaryosto-settlement Since you are kind enough to offer it would be foolish to turn down feedback.

    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    23 May, 2023 06:14

    That's great! I love it when a challenge can make you get around to something you've been meaning to. I've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with your feedback when we're done judging.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    22 May, 2023 22:21
    22 May, 2023 22:22

    And I'd love some feedback on it!


    Check out my entry for the Treasured Companions Challenge: the Ghost Boy of Kirinal! His article also spilled over into Adventuring With Ghost Boy full of plot hooks and his 5E stat block!

    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    23 May, 2023 06:16

    We're judging entries as they come in, which means this might get judged before you have time to make those edits, are you sure you'd like to enter this now?

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    23 May, 2023 10:34

    I've given it a quick lookover and I'm okay with entering it now!


    Check out my entry for the Treasured Companions Challenge: the Ghost Boy of Kirinal! His article also spilled over into Adventuring With Ghost Boy full of plot hooks and his 5E stat block!

    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    23 May, 2023 11:23

    Great! I've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with your feedback when we're done judging.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    23 May, 2023 14:59

    My article is on the Monsters of Lake Nicodes in a world I haven't touched in a long while.  

    The Monsters of Lake Nicodes
    Species | May 23, 2023
      I opt in for feedback if you have the time and energy to provide it

    ⚝Senna Nightshade⚝
    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    23 May, 2023 17:47

    Woo for revisiting old worlds! I've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with your feedback when we're done judging.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    23 May, 2023 16:30

    Aaaaaand done good enough for now! There's more I want to write about, but here are my alien cuttlefish!   Feedback is welcome!

    Author of Ion Tides and more!
    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    23 May, 2023 17:47

    We're judging entries as they come in, which means this might get judged before you have time to make those changes, are you sure you'd like to enter this now?

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    26 May, 2023 16:08

    I am sure.

    Author of Ion Tides and more!
    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    26 May, 2023 16:16

    Alright! I wanted to double check! I've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with the feedback when we're done judging.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    23 May, 2023 20:11

    I would be interested in feedback.

    Thalatta
    Geographic Location | May 29, 2023
      Also, as something separate, were there badges for the unofficial food flash challenge in 2021?

    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    24 May, 2023 07:22

    Excellent! I've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with the feedback when we're done judging.   Also, yes, there were badges for the unofficial food challenge, but they weren't set up like the ones in this article. I went and set that up now though, so if you'd like to add it to your articles you can use the bb code: [imgblock:4538844]   (Apologies for the multiple notifications, I messed up the bb code in this comment trying to add in the badge.)

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    24 May, 2023 14:10

    Here is my entry! And feedback is definitely welcome.

    Sea Hollowed.

    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    25 May, 2023 09:47

    Great! I've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with the feedback when we're done judging.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    25 May, 2023 03:32

    Here is my entry. I would appreciate any and all constructive feedback.  

    Karakhai Aberrations
    Condition | Jun 16, 2023

    supernatural transformation of karakhai forcibly imprisoned

    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    25 May, 2023 09:48

    Neat! I've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with the feedback when we're done judging.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    25 May, 2023 15:52

    Thanks for hosting such a fun challenge! I ended up writing several articles to support this one:

    The Joining
    Tradition / Ritual | Aug 28, 2023

    The cultural event surrounding zaratan mating on the ocean planet of Torm.

      I'd love feedback, privately if possible :)

    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    25 May, 2023 17:35

    I'm glad you've had fun! Privately is certainly possible! I've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with the feedback when we're done judging.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    Sage EmilyArmstrong
    Emily Armstrong
    25 May, 2023 16:47

    Thank you for this challenge! I had an absolute blast creating these lil Taffylopods, I can't wait to include them in some upcoming stories :D

    Taffylopod
    Species | Jun 14, 2023

    Check out my worlds of Beckettville and Culinarypunk!
    Sage EmilyArmstrong
    Emily Armstrong
    25 May, 2023 16:48

    Would love feedback as well! Thank you again! :D

    Check out my worlds of Beckettville and Culinarypunk!
    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    25 May, 2023 17:35

    So glad you enjoyed it! I've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with the feedback when we're done judging.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    26 May, 2023 11:06

    Current Driller
    Species | Jun 14, 2023
      A speedy fish for a speedy challenge. The article is very short, but I didn't find word requirements so I hope it's still eligible! Some may say their horn is what lead to the discovery of smoothies in the world. I'd love to receive feedback!

    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    26 May, 2023 11:17

    There's no minimum, so it is eligible! I've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with the feedback when we're done judging.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    27 May, 2023 05:57

    Feeling the time crunch hard with a lot of stuff, but I think I might be able to come up with some for this at least!   One question though: does a Boat count as "under the seas" for the purposes of this Challenge?

    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    27 May, 2023 07:45

    Yes, a boat absolutely counts!

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    27 May, 2023 20:04

    https://www.worldanvil.com/w/explorers-of-starsea/a/the-descent-of-ide-article I would like to opt in for private feedback. Thank you!

    27 May, 2023 20:07

    The article didn't pop-up, so I'm trying bbcode :D

    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    28 May, 2023 07:35

    Great! I've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with the feedback as a private comment when we're done judging.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    28 May, 2023 19:03

    Shout out to White Gladis who inspired this article! I opt in on feedback, cheers!  

    Black Sea Wolf
    Species | Jun 15, 2023


    Too low they build who build beneath the stars - Edward Young
    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    29 May, 2023 06:20

    White Gladis is such an inspiration. I've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with the feedback when we're done judging.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    Sage eccbooks
    E. Christopher Clark
    29 May, 2023 00:13

    Here's a quick one from me, all about sea goats. I'll take feedback if you have time, but am willing to forgo it if you have too many entries to get through.   Thanks again for putting this together!

    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    29 May, 2023 06:47

    Shouldn't be a problem! We've logged your entry, and we'll get back to you with the feedback when we're done judging.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    Sage oaster2000
    Owen Davies
    29 May, 2023 22:55

    https://www.worldanvil.com/w/nonvyrox-oaster2000/a/qra-kovra-article - This is what I call cutting it fine... But still in time!

    "The world is only as big as one makes it. So make it bigger by expanding your mind."
    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    30 May, 2023 07:49

    What a sprint! I've logged your entry!

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    30 May, 2023 03:54

    Sorry to be dropping this in so very late. It's been a vague concept for a very long time, and this was exactly the excuse I needed to give it some detailing. It's rough, and I know the image quality isn't great, but I won't be able to scan the drawings until tomorrow. I'll accept feedback all the same. Thanks!   https://www.worldanvil.com/w/the-ocean-the-big-g/a/chok-swarm-vehicle?preview=true

    From The River to The Ocean, a civilization grows up.
    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    30 May, 2023 07:50

    It's technically a bit after the deadline, but you got it in before I woke up, so I'm happy to include it still. Your entry has been logged and we'll get back to you with feedback once the judging is complete.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris
    30 May, 2023 11:35

    Oh--I'm so sorry, I had the countdown timer open and thought there was an hour to spare. In that case don't worry about it. I developed the idea and that's all I really wanted to accomplish.

    From The River to The Ocean, a civilization grows up.
    Sage nnie
    Annie Stein
    30 May, 2023 12:53

    No need to apologize, I am glad I got to read and include yours too. I also already logged and scored your entry, and shared it in the most recent list of entries. It'll take us a while longer to finish writing the feedback for everyone, but trust that it's all in progress.

    Creator of Solaris -— Come Explore! | Summercamp in Solaris