Black Sea Wolf
A mixture of a fish and a serpent, the Black Sea Wolf is a creature that many consider not just a Beast, but one of the most dangerous Beasts out there. On the other hand, those that know how to deal with them often don't even consider them a Beast due to their calm nature. They can even be an ally and are known to save people. That is, assuming one doesn't make them angry first, as they are cruel and vindictive when they need to be.
As they are known to not only seek revenge on their own adversaries, but also any identifiable associate, we Wayfarers should make sure never to anger them. It could endanger all of us that ever venture forth into the cold seas.
Sea Killer
Fish Serpent
Thanks for taking part in the unofficial challenge! Creativity: 3,5 Verisimilitude: 4,5 Presentation: 5 It is unclear to me how you intend to present the article. At one point, you write: “no specimens have ever been investigated by us”, but it isn’t clear who the author is or what group he is referring to. Nowhere else in the article do I get the idea that it is written from that sort of perspective. If that’s the route you want to go, there’s a lot of cool stuff you can do with that to add life and personality to the article. I would think about how you present the information in the article and the flow of it. It might be better to put Physical Details first after the overview, to give the readers an idea of what they are dealing with before moving on to the other aspects. Some of the header titles could also use some refining. ‘Usability’ feels like an odd word to use for a creature, and ‘Nature’ seems like it is somewhat of a mix of behaviour, social state, and some history. Some of it could probably be moved to its own section and expanded on, like those kinds of history. There’s also some details you could add some information to. Like, what kind of Beast can threaten one of the most dangerous beasts (sea wolves), details about the navy they destroyed, what kind of disasters that might cull their numbers, any specifically noteworthy member of the species.
Creator of Araea, Megacorpolis, and many others.
Cheers for the feedback! I used it to shuffle the order and change the headers a bit. It's an attempt at a default structure for all Beast articles, which is also why history doesn't get its own section. Implied more heavily in some articles than others, the narrators are always employees of the Wayfarer Guild, writing down these documents for other Wayfarers to study. I added a paragraph to the intro for making it more clear in this case. Thanks again!
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