Oracle stared at the hives, each thriving in large white boxes. The paint gave off a bluish glow, an effect of the sunlight pouring through the glass dome above. He sat on a large, smoothed stone. He waited patiently, his thoughts focused on the moment. He raised his hand to his brow, the sweat glistening on his dark brown skin before being wiped away. The apiary was kept warm at all times. The bees couldn't survive Safeharbor's cool and constant climate. Stacy walked through the door on the far side of the apiary. She was starting to show, and he couldn't help but smile when he noticed. She carried two wooden cups, each filled with water. When she handed him his, he took a sip and savored the flavor of lemon and honey, still strong as the ice barely had time to melt. He felt something on his hand, an itch so faint it could be confused for the wind in the presence of a light breeze. He brought his hand up and saw the worker bee dancing around his fingers and up his arm before flying off.
"Matthew?" She asked. He turned his head and lost himself in her hazel eyes. He stopped himself before leaning in to give her a kiss. The thought of it left him uneasy, his skin colliding, grating against hers. He took a breath, prepared himself, and did it anyway. It was always a strange experience: a brief relief of tension followed by panic when he realized how unbearably coarse skin can be. The desire was there. He wished he could muster the will to kiss every freckle on her pale skin. The flesh though... the flesh was far from willing. He sighed, pushing the thought from his mind. "Time for a harvest?" He asked. She nodded. "I'll help you." He shook his head, "Don't you dare. I got this. You should go lay down. You know what the doctor said." "It's only been a few months," she began. He raised a brow, and she laughed raising one of her own. "It won't hurt the baby. No one gets to tell me what to do. Now remember, don't swat at them. You're invading their home. Show them respect."
Note: Everyone knows what they are, and so I decided to focus far more on their relationship with humans and the cultural impact they have.
Honey can last for literally millennia...
BEES!
MOAR BEES!
Also yes, people are wanting to bring bees to future colonies!
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Space bees, in tiny little space suits Awesome stuff Dyl, glad to see you back in writing action :)
Yes! Space Bees! I have a thing for bees. lol Thanks for the kind words man. I lost myself a bit there. Nice to have it back again. Thanks so much.
I love this! I like da bees! Also I wanna try the archivist trigger commands, I know need to now what to say
YESSS, good. love the bees! also i dont have much set up for the commands. A few things here and there but thus far, its more a way to answer questions in character and allow for interaction. Anything would work. lol thanks so much Cato!
I like the idea of honey being such a main part of the diet. How much would people consume daily? They must all have vey big hives to produce enough honey - and load of flowers to feed those bees. And the fact that alien plants are not good for them make the situation even worse... This is very interesting from an economy POV :D
I plan on the apiaries being an article as well and I'll be diving into these things and answering the questions there. Thanks for inspiring it! It really got me thinking and now I wanna delve a bit further. Thanks for the lovely comment.
I love bees. They are such amazing insects.
Oooo I know! If I wasnt allergic to the sting, I'd be a beekeeper. They really are awesome. Thanks so much!
Oh, this article is so beautifully soft. I absolutely love their relationship and the codependence between the humans and bees, it certainly feels very human, if that makes sense.
Thanks so much! I really like bees and it was only fitting for them to show up. XD thanks for those lovely words! :)
I always love my trips back to the Void Between, especially because of your great use of the first-person plural—it just makes me feel so much more a part of the story. And I love that you tackled bees here. Great work!
I'm glad you like it here, my friend! i appreciate the kind words. Thanks so much!!
Bees are cool. I love the small touches you gave them, like the interaction with alien flora. I'm curious, though. The flowers give off a fragrance pleasent to humans, right? So chances are the bees would be attracted by them as well. Is it something wrong with the chemistry or are they low on nectar and provide a poor source for sugars? Are there alien species pollinating the flowers? Aaah, so many questions! :D
OOOO okay so it is probably chemical in nature. They don't seem to register the alien flora at all. Yes indeed there are pollinators native to safeharbor but they are more solitary and don't cover quite the same ground that bees could, hence why they didn't try to use them. Thanks so much! i appreciate the kind words.
What a great idea to use bees for the working animal prompt. It fits perfectly with your setting. Because of the prose parts I wonder now how humans reproduce in your setting. Since they can't stand to touch each other. Not that it has anything to do with the subject of this article. :)
Ooo thanks so much! Hope all is going well and No worries at all, I'm actually surprised it wasnt mentioned sooner XD It's much more difficult for earthborn, who have developed haphephobia in response to touch. Usually artificial means of reproduction are used there. Later generations are better adapted to the modifications and find their own ways. Much like how Oracle does here, they can power through it. Another way is by overwhelming the senses. Stargazing is romantic, but it's also a good time to be intimate. Once in process, the act is overwhelming enough. The human brain does alllll kinds of weird things throughout an intimate expirience. Pain is dulled, fatigue can fade, and that's just the tip of the iceberg. It's how our species survives so we developed ways of putting certain issues on the backburner to prioritize. This basically overrides the tactile issues, or at least deadens them. When that doesnt work, every human is different. Some are less effected and some days are better than others. If both parties are on a good day, then it's easier. Hope that helps! Tried to keep it tasteful. Again thanks for the kind words!
Thank you for the reply and explanation. That makes perfect sense.
Beeeeeeeeeeees! <3 I love how thoughtful this article is in expressing humanity's relationship with bees, and the lengths the people of Safeharbor go to preserve them. It makes me think of the current push in our world to save the bees (in England, anyway). As always, the prose surrounding the article is great. I love the subtle reminder of the touch aversion thing humanity has developed.
Yes indeed. The bees need saving. The us is trying but like most things were a bit behind XD I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much.
SPACE BEEEES. I love this, particularly the care and love the people feel for the bees. Great stuff!
Thanks storm! I appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed it
I like honey as a staple food, but more importantly the importance of bees when growing plants (I suppose earth-bound plants, not alien ones in this case). This is a very interesting article and I enjoy the tone you use when writing. The quotes also seem like part of a story I’m interested in reading more about.
Every guild of adventurers needs a staple food to obsess over; it's a rule. I like how it gives folks a way to add just a bit of setting flavor to any human-made meal they want to write about; just add honey!
It's great to hear from ya. I was debating sending a message just to check in but was worried cause its none of my business. Hope all is well. Thanks for the comment as always! Looks like you've been rather busy XD
Oh sorry about that; I kept forgetting to check world anvil and this past week I've been on vacation.
Bees! I think this may be the first sci-fi thing I've seen even attempt to look at bees beyond them...dying. A nice start to the season!
Whooh. It's been a while. Again. Sorry about that, it is a bit daunting to return to such a task when you pumped out like 90 articles in the past month. Anyway, I'll see about reading through a few in the next few days and leave some (hopefully) helpful comments. I'm excited to see what you have in store for the rest of the second season!
He raised his hand to his brow, the sweat glistening on his dark brown skin before being wiped away.
The apiary was kept warm at all times. The bees couldn't survive Safeharbor's cool and constant climate.
She was starting to show
prompting us to develop methods of providing livable conditions
These developments and more began with a simple initiative
The thought of it left him uneasy, his skin colliding, grating against hers.
Ooooo ok so what ima do here has nothing to do with the comment. Your points are spot on, and much appreciated. Rather I'm taking a moment to talk complex grammar nonsense to check what I know, think i know, and what i assume against someone who knows grammar better than me. If the following sounds in any way confrontational, trust me, it isnt. I just wanna get my facts straight cause if I am in fact wrong in this, I got alot of work to do XD While reading I picked up on what you're saying but I kept getting confused due to the error cited. . I tried sifting through my old composition textbooks and well... lets just say theres a reason they were gathering dust, so no luck there. Passive language/passive voice is exactly as you said, basically when the subject is treated as an object, being acted upon rather than performing the action. It's when you refer to somthing like you're talking about it rather than it actually happening. The problem here is theres not really any passive language used In the first snippet you pointed out. At the same time it works as it strings together in a way that draws attention to two subjects, one coupled with a verb, the other coupled with a present participle. You throw a period there, change glistening to glistened and you'd have two perfect and complete sentences. Technically I'm not switching the main subject but this is where things get weird... reallllly weird and my brain starts to hurt cause I do this often and it works for style and flow, but I have no idea if it flies in the face of grammar, which you'd know more than I. Oracle performs an action and yhe sweat is not dependent on being wiped away, rather its agreement is with glistening if I remember correctly, "before being wiped away " is a subordinate clause... I think. It could be argued that the understood is/was in the sentence is the blame, (the sweat was/is glistening...) the problem there is that subordinate is meant to pull double duty, not only continuing the thought but also tying it into the motion Oracle (the main subject) performed. The sweat is glistening, before being wiped away (because) oracle raised his hand to his brow to wipe it away. Frankly I have no idea, but I'm curious to hear your thoughts on what I'm saying. I can only hope I've said it to where my thoughts are understandable. Again, understand I wouldnt be presenting this if I didnt respect you as an authority on the subject higher than me, so I hope it wasnt offensive. I just noticed last time you mentioned passive I was just as confused. I always understood passive voicing as a very specific structure to be avoided unless the situation calls for it (such as the unknown agent in the sentence "Stonehenge WAS built in england.) I desperately try to avoid those passive words unless it helps the flow. Back to the awesome comment here, I will probably be changing the snippet regardless. If it raised flags for you, its bound to raise it for others. Besides, your correction is much better anyway. You hit it on the head on the second snippet. I could add otherwise at the end, but I'll rephrase to avoid blood. Thanks for that! This might be some culture clash to fix on the third thing you pointed out. Starting to show, when said exactly like that, means only one thing in my neck of the woods: pregnant to the point where its showing. I'll try to work around it. I cant remember if your us or overseas but either way it's a problem I should rectify. I agree on livable habitats, though livable might be redundant... hmm. I'll fix it! Ooo so Initiative is actually the right term. Goal isnt the intended meaning, but its part of the meaning, rather an initiative is a new and organized effort or plan centered around a common goal. The last one is a little technical but it is correct, of course. I'll fix that too! As always, thank you so much. I'm still trying to edit the season. I've been pecking at it while trying to finish it. I should be able to stay ahead of ya though. Oracle is actually an old character but he is the most forgettable on the ship. This was my first attempt at characterizing him properly since it didnt happen last time. This season is a doozy. Make no mistake. XD (P.S for real help me on that grammar thing cause I'm dying over here. Lol)
Contrary to what you may believe, I'm not that much of an expert at grammar. Unfortunately, thus far, the school system has vastly neglected to teach much about anything related to actual grammar. Rather, I've got an acceptably accurate intuition about English grammar. And, to that point, you are correct. The real problem isn't the active/passive. It's the article plus the before. I attempted another rewording that solves the problem completely, both fairly simple: "He raised his hand to his brow, sweat glistening on his dark brown skin before being wiped away" or "He raised his hand to his brow, sweat glistening on his dark brown skin before Oracle wiped away." I believe my problem actually arose with the use of the word "the." I don't even know how to identify what's wrong with the article, likely something with the implication of a new subject instead of the introduction of an object. It's particularly peculiar. Ahh. No. I think it's that I just am not used to the term. I am in the US as well, so I have heard it before. But I've also not read about/seen enough pregnant people to have heard the it often. It fits now that you've established it, but yeah... I hadn't heard that in a while. Ohhh. Right. That is correct. I just forgot that initiative doesn't just mean proactive steps but also a procedure. Whoops. That one is also on me.
Naw man that clears up so much, its definitely the article. Holy crap that one was definitely an oddball. By saying "the" you are implying a "was" before glistening. Making it sound not onkynpassive but all kinds of issues. Because "was" isn't therethere, its puts the whole thing in limbo. Oof. That would actually make sense, and another good reason to alter it a bit cause not everyone has kids. I heard that like once a day till my son was born. Yup intuitive is a weird one that changes with it's part of speech. No worries! It's still an awesome comment and especially with your response, incredibly insightful. I always learn something from your comments! Thanks so much.
Nice job on this article! I find it interesting how humans managed to bring the bees with them and settle them on Safeharbor. The fact that they're so important to humanity's survival is also cool, since our current culture doesn't use honey as much. The quotes about Oracle really illuminate the struggle everyone has with wanting to touch others but at the same time hating the thought of having to do it.
For some reason my computer won't let me leave a like! Probably my internet acting up again. But a wonderful article, the bees need all the love right now with how their population levels are decreasing! :) I'm glad they made it to Safeharbor.
That is odd! No worries if you cant. It's all good. Also yes, it is good that they made it. They definitely need alot of help. Thanks so much. I got alot of your stuff to catch up on. Doing it currently.
Also had a rogue tag, so it can be liked now. Sorry about that.
Ah, hah! That explains it. I have now pressed the like button! Thanks. And hurrah for bees, the buzziest creatures in all of Safeharbor (unless there are some insect aliens I don't know about). XD
Oh dear... pipe roaches. We dont like pipe roaches.
Oh no, those sound horrifying! I don't like the sound of pipe roaches. D: