The Archive
The archive of
Safeharbor sits on a hill just outside of the colony. Here, I study massive amounts of data in relative secrecy. The archives are closed to the public, though one can request an audience with me at any time. I even permit a lucky few to come and go as they please.
Caydie Kines, the daughter of autumn's governor, routinely crept into the archives before her death. She was a dear friend, and routinely assisted in my search. Being
The Archivist of Safeharbor was less lonely back then.
I recover technology and culture lost to the ages from data originating from earth, as well as the species that built this planet wide city. Everything from books and music to blueprints for voidcraft have been found in my search.
Government
Safeharbor is a democratic planet. Every citizen has a voice. We enjoy many freedoms, including free speech, press, religion, and other basic rights. Each colony is represented by a governor, the elders of Safeharbor. These are elected officials, often earthborn, who handle the infrastructure of their respective colonies, but not their legislative or executive processes.
While the elders have little to do with legislation, they campaign in an attempt to sway voters, pleading their case when advocating for a particular outcome. Voters from each colony travel to Autumn to make their voice known in bimonthly "seasons," each season having its own issues to be voted on. Safeharbor has few laws and next to no way to enforce those laws. There are a select few tasked with keeping the peace, usually
Wayfarers from
Homebound.
The
Wayfarers' authority is purely based on their reputation outside of the colony of
Dawn. Of course, most citizens are well-behaved to begin with. The occasional crime is investigated diligently, and it's rare for the wayfarers to fail in solving the crime. The planet wide surveillance system has proved invaluable, It's so much more effective when most citizens fail to notice it exists.
Uhhh. So, you should probably mention it's a settlement a bit earlier as "it's the only place human architecture can be found" is really confusing if you still think that you're talking about the autumn season in Safeharbor. I just read Juliet, so I'm not certain the difference between Juliet and Autumn in their focus. While you immediately state that Autumn is a colony, I don't think that you mentioned Juliet as a colony, suggesting it's just a city? Not sure what's going on there. While it's nice to mention the Archives are in this particular colony, you slightly repeat information here. It's not inherently problematic, however, I feel like you should find on particular trait of the Archives to focus on and then link the reader to the actual archives. Maybe you should, in order to stay in context, have a container type at the bottom of sections like this with something like "Would you like to access the Query: Archives?" and include an article block. That would be a nice way to smoothly interconnect your articles. Uhh. Don't you think the fact the Archivist is aware of the surveillance should be a little more secret? If he's aware that it's effective because the citizens are unaware of it, would he not usually try to keep it a bit more secretive? Also, the mention of a hidden surveillance system is nice as I was about to ask if the government implemented any sort of secretive actions to ensure humanity wasn't lost to inner-species conflict. Dawn disagrees with who's status as the capital? Is Dawn the capital because I would think Autumn is the capital? Your phrasing in that last section of the side bar is super vague. Anyway, did you publish an article on Dawn yet? It feels familiar but I don't think I've read anything on it? Anyway, this is a nice article. It does propose a lot of questions remain unanswered. This is likely a side effect of your rapid writing and the shorter form articles on a setting, which would generally open up a larger article than this.
Oooooo yessss that's a lovely idea. I'll consider linking articles like that. Thatd be cool. Also yes. This was another quicky. I'll be expanding on all these points. So that's actually a bad typo. Juliet is trying to be the capital cause of its infrastructure and population, but autumn is considered the capital. They are both colonies XD sorry not that.