Named after the heroine from an old earth stage production, Juliet has the largest density in population on the planet of
Safeharbor. Its population sits around five thousand, most being industrial workers, engineers, farmers, researchers and skilled craftsmen.
Most live in the ruins of Safeharbor's planet wide city, settling in the sturdier buildings around Caydie's Cradle. Each building is self-sustaining, with vertical farms and solar panels built on makeshift patios and along the outer walls.
This is where the beating heart of humanity rests, where our industry resides. The workers in the cradle produce weapons, voidcraft, and many of the goods needed to live a life in relative comfort.
Well. Your setting continues to expand without really growing in scale, which is pretty cool. I like the name of Juliet, however, I feel like you could make this article even better by suggesting a reason for which the settlement was named after Juliet. Presuming that the reason wasn't lost with the earth. You should probably give a slight alteration to the first sentence under the Caydie's Cradle. Technically, it's not needed, however, it's always nice to specify things so the reader is aware you're not insane. Therefore, I believe you should mention that Caydie's Cradle is a part of Juliet and not some random tangent. As an addition to the labs bit, I'd love to read an article going into the people who work there specifically--as they'd be the scientists of humanity--as well as what kind of research/innovation occurring in the labs. I really like the mention of the last chapel. I would, however, love to see something like a focused query on the remnants of the rooms there as well as other information to accentuate the idea that it's this almost dead setting in which faith has slowly worn away. Speaking of which, you totally should add some more queries as those faded away after your first few articles. Anyway, awesome work. How you managed to get this article out so fast will always amaze me as you managed to publish two articles and a journal entry while I was sleeping! Great work!
Yeah this one was rushed for sure and thanks for the suggestions. I shall polish it to perfection! I gotta go fast! Lol thankfully this was my last or second to last for WE.