“I told you to leave.” The archivist said, turning from the woman.
“Not until I do what I came here to do.” Invicta replied, stepping forward and handing him a small electronic device.
The red lenses on the archivist’s face flashed. “Is that a hard drive?”
“It contains recordings we found on a derelict ark that never made it to
Safeharbor, recordings from earth’s surface when it began its voyage.” The archivist eyed the drive, took it, and scanned it using every method he could think of. Invicta laughed, shaking her head, “I wouldn't try to pull one over on you. You should know that by now.”
The archivist plugged the drive into an old earth computer, the lenses flashing repeatedly as he explored the drive. An audio file played, echoing off the chamber of the archive. What he heard were screams. He heard the sounds of terror, pain, and rage. Something muttered in the back of the audio, a viscous roar that bubbled in the static.
“It seems there was a rogue signal intercepted by the ark.” The archivist said.
“We know that. What does that signal sound like to you?”
The archivist shot his head up, then back to the floor as he pondered the implications. “It sounds like laughter.”
Ok. Let's dig into the conflicting bits of the opening to start. Firstly, while I liked the whole mentioning of the separation of humanity from their culture, I feel like you should mention something about how it brought humanity together as they faced the unknown of the expansive universe. Secondly, you call 6 generations 300 years. If I recall correctly, humanity has extended their lifespan which would, in general, suggest that generations would expand a bit more into, maybe, 600 years instead? Not sure on that, but something to consider. What are earthborn again? I know I should know, but it's either those from the generation first born on earth or those still being born on earth. The latter of which makes little sense. I like the repetition of the "maybe this happened." Also, the whole idea of theology within this world is super mindboggling to me. For humanity to have been thrust into the unknown, realizing their insignificance within the universe, one would expect any remaining semblance of religion to be crashing and burning at this point. I guess humans will always cling to an explanation, however ridiculous it may be. I'd be curious to see the state of religion within your world as, considering the current focus on earth, religion would have suffered following the experiences that humanity faced within the wider universe. "To regrow a spine as soon as it's convenient" Seriously, I love the Archivist. There's so much sass, these articles have to be so fun to write. I'm so curious what happened to the earth and the fact you've made it clear you're never going to even tell your audience is killing me. So, I guess congratulations? Anway, this was a super interesting article. I'd love to know a bit more about the earthborn, especially what state they are in considering the fact none speak of the earth anymore. For that to have happened would suggest that the previous events were enough to scar even the most courageous of humans.
So. Uhh. I read this before the surrounding quotes. Those add a nice touch to the article, especially the last one. However, I'm still seething about the fact I'm probably never going to know what happened. The odd theory that comes to mind is humanity, though in a time of unprecedented peace, was in pursuit of a weapon so great that no war would even survive. Possibly even a biological weapon. And, instead of controlling it, they "broke into heaven" unleashing the destruction that destroyed the earth.
So its kind of strange. A generations is a VERY bad way of measuring time. Usually, Generations are defined by the years it takes for children to be born and grow up to have kids of their own. from what i gather it's 20-40 years. I then took extended lifespan into account and kept the figure at 40-50, which accounts for sociological stuff too, In sociology, researchers look at generations a bit differently. According to the dictionary, this term refers to “a group of individuals born and living contemporaneously.” Think millenials, and baby boomers. Since there is an extended lifespan, contemporary time periods will change as well. I also dont want to make humans other than the exiles TOOOO long lived. so i figured 300 would work. Not sure how it works in practice. May change eventually. Course, the figure can always be wrong... ;] I'll change it to "earth born humans," which is all it means XD Ohhhhh, i really need to do that article. Religion is definitely in a weird place for humanity. When your interacting with a race that believes their ships to be literal and figurative gods, religion can be murky. Many of the old world religions have either died out, or evolved into new forms. I have many ideas for this and that article will be coming soon! absolutely. The archivist is SO FUN. I love being able to play around with his narration. I'll do an article on the earthborn for sure. To be honest, I really don't know if I'll ever truly reveal it in full. The mystery is so critical to the setting, yet i want there to be an element of closure. it may not be fully revealed but details will trickle through that allow one to make their own decision, with that little layer of doubt lingering behind it. I've even toyed with the idea that its possible earthborn simply can't speak of the earth, no matter how hard they want to or try. I've even pondered finding a way for ALL of these theories to be true. Who knows... That is a good theory, for sure. It could have been a weapon, or some other kind of tech, that did the earth in. I can't say either way, though. XD
Spotted a typo upon rereading: "and that assumes theirs an earth left to find." should be "there's an earth" Also. I've rediscovered my theory comments and I think that they shall be of use in the discovery of how humanity Broke into Heaven. (Also, I think I'm going to twist your prompt a little bit as, since it's basically fanfiction, I'm going to make it a more active retelling than just theorizing. What an interesting way to get community engagement.)
Oooooo doooo itttttt! That's exciting. That's perfectly fine!