Yael Pashei
The protector of the Treil
Chieftain Yael Pashei (a.k.a. Chief, Ya)
She came out of the house, proud and tall. Her short, black hair flew around her face in the wild wind, she had smile-wrinkles and worry lines. She didn't seem to be too old, but her eyes looked as if they'd seen countless centuries worth of conflicts.Yael is currently one of the most important chieftains of the Treil. She was elected chieftain when she was just 24 years old in 778 AK.
History
Early life
Yael was born in 754 AK in the town of Arcmore in Halivaara. She was born under one of the toughest winters the cold north has ever experienced. The survival chances for a small baby in that period was small, but Yael's parents did everything in their power to make sure she made it. Their efforts were fruitful and she grew up to be a healthy and strong Iwachi.
She was born into the Pashei family, which was a family of fishers. When she was 7 years old, she lost her older brother to the brutal waves. That left her with only one other sibling, her younger sister. When she was 17 years old, her father died of sickness and she had to take up the family business, or else her family would starve.
Problems with Ildres
The Country of Ildres had mostly left the Treil alone in the first 15 years of Yael's life, but that soon changed. Mercenaries most likely sent by hateful high-standing citizens of Ildres were sent to kill and hunt the Treil as if they were animals. This took a toll on all the towns in Halivaara. Yael trained in her past time with the chieftains of Arcmore and soon became a skilled leader and fighter. She set out with the oldest chieftain in the town to go confront the president of Ildres.
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Those waves sure are angry and brutal. I can understand why they would go to war against them :D Well done again! I couldn't find much to complain about. I like the personal life container, but the dotted lines and the words that are links are a bit hard to read. Maybe tweak the background of that section a bit or maybe make the link text colour stronger and more visible. Or you could also do both.
The article did leave me with a few questions regarding the negotiations with Ildres. From what was written, it sounded like everything went pretty smooth. If Eastril is valuable and only exists in Halivaara, why wouldn't anyone launch a proper invasion against them? Would like to learn more about that whole situation in the future.
Overall the article was enjoyable to read and I like the length of your recent articles. Makes it easy for me to read all of them. Keep up the great work! :3
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