The Ziggurath

This will be my final entry. Kai is the fastest among us and will carry this missive back to Dhanû and tell of what we have found. Perhaps this war is not so hopeless after all - there are powers in this world that defy the spread of cold we have seen.   We will descend into the Ziggurath to find answers. If we die, remember our names and sing of our glories. It will not be for naught.  
— Shibanvæ, Dhanû Slayer
  The first explorers to tell of the Ziggurath were dismissed as raving and mad, sanity lost in their long treks through the Lost Lands. What they described was impossible: a perfectly symmetrical pit carved out of the stone, vast in size and immeasurably deep. As the years passed and the Lost Lands have crept into the Sheoin Region, the Ziggurath have faded further into obscure myth.   It was not until others began speaking of places in the Lost Lands where the ice did not reach, of strange steps that seemed carved by hand, that the Ziggurath reemerged from legends long forgotten.    

The Journey Through Hell

 
I'd heard stories of the Lost Lands... But they do little justice to the place. The air is so cold! Our breath comes out as steam and our eyebrows freeze. I can't help but think that should any blood be shed here, it'll freeze before it even hit the ground.   We are well provisioned and prepared. For all her faults, Sōtari Q'in has proven her worth and the value of her advice. The insulated coats of chitin she insisted we bring are heavy but do much to keep the cold out. I can't imagine going here without them.   The caves around us are frozen. After the first few miles of crawling through tunnels, I can no longer see stone. The glow-powder helps us see now that the Ahi Bugs have died. Frozen to death. Should the Lost Lands continue to spread, everything in Sheoin will look like this forsaken place.
  The Ziggurath can only be reached through a treacherous journey through the Lost Lands. This freezing region of caverns has been completely dominated by the cold-spreading monsters of Sheoin, coating the stone in frost and ice. The ice is sculpted by the inhabitants, gnawed jagged by skittering hordes of frost-eating bugs or made perfectly smooth by unknown beasts. Like blood veins, chitinous tendrils sprawl across the walls and ceiling, connecting distant hives.  

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by Marc Scoll


Travel through the Lost Lands is dangerous. Not only is the exact location of the Ziggurath only a guess but the things that live beneath the sway of the cold-spreading Blossom are hostile and hungry. Slippery ice, freezing temperature and uneven terrain make battling such does foes a lethal affair. There is no light in these tunnels beyond what explorers bring and a few murderous lures by bioluminescent hunters.  
Lost our first today. We aren't sure where he went and there was no scream. I wanted to wait, but Sōtari Q'in would not have it. It pains me to leave a comrade behind... But in my heart, I know that she is right. Waiting would only make us the next meal.  
— Shibanvæ, Dhanû Slayer

   

Approaching The Ziggurath

 
I'm no longer sure how much time has passed or how far we have traveled. We count our progress not in miles now, but in corpses. We have lost several but this time we have retrieved their masks. Each one slain have not gone quietly and made their clan proud. The creatures here are strange... Some of them seem like they are made of ice but bleed when struck. Other look more like bone or mold bristling with frost.   I almost lost hope when I saw the thaw. When we saw stone again for the first time in what feels like an eternity, I thought we had gone in a circle and come back out of the Lost Lands... But our light reached that yawning abyss.  
— Shibanvæ, Dhanû Slayer
  The Ziggurath is believed to be in the center of a titanic cavern. Every entrance into it is clogged with ice and populated by especially vicious beasts. Where the Blossoms hold sway, the tunnels bristle with ice-pikes and sharp protrusions, pointing inwards to the cave. Despite their heavy presence, the frost ends after only a dozen yards into the cave and explorers can see the black rock of the caves again. The ceiling of the cavern is uneven, dipping low enough in places to be seen in the light of a torch. In others, it disappears upwards into darkness.  
At least with these monsters around, we've had plenty of meat.  
— Shibanvæ, Dhanû Slayer
     

Descending Steps

 
The edge is perfectly straight, like the blade of a good sword. It continues beyond our light in both directions. Kai suggested taking a torch and running the length to get an idea, but I didn't want anyone to wander off alone. It is like a staircase, save for its size... If we wanted to descend, we would have to climb each step. I thought I heard a voice.   We traveled along the edge until we reached one of the corners. There is a column here, but I don't recognize the inscriptions. Not that I think any of the other city-states could have made anything like this. Least of all in a place like this.   Still, it is cause for hope. The cold does not spread here. If we could determine why, perhaps we could halt its slow consumption of our lands. If I could... My name would be remembered for eternity and my mask would be placed in the Halls of the Exarch.   If.  
— Shibanvæ, Dhanû Slayer
  Monumental in size, the Ziggurath's step are each taller than a man. Columns cap each corner and a large carved slope descends into the Ziggurath from them. It is made from the same stone found in the cavern, a hard black rock with veins of ore and crystal throughout, polished to gleam. Age has eaten through the descent in places, broken apart by quakes and where the ceiling has collapsed from high above. Arch-ways hint of doors that lead into the structure itself. No one has yet been able to determine how deep the Ziggurath is or what lies within it.  
Others have heard it too. Voice, growls... Seen creatures that move in the darkness below. We are not alone here. Are they guards or are they the builders of this place? We held council on our next course. Some wanted to return with the news of what we had already found, but it was settled by vote. We will begin descending after a short rest.  
— Shibanvæ, Dhanû Slayer
       

The Heart of Darkness

 
Q'in is dead. We are lost. I am lost.   This will be my final entry. Kai is the fastest among us and will carry this missive back to Dhanû and tell of what we have found. Perhaps this war is not so hopeless after all - there are powers in this world that deft the spread of cold we have seen.   We will descend into the Ziggurath to find answers. If we die, remember our names and sing of our glories. It will not be for naught.  
— Shibanvæ, Dhanû Slayer

The Lost Lands   The Ziggurath is hidden within the Lost Lands, a part of the Sheoin region of the Inner Shell. This part of Araea lies deep beneath the blasted Surface, below uncountable miles of stone and tunnel. The Lost Lands are wracked by snow and ice, conquered by frost-spreading hive-creatures known as Blossoms. Only the Ziggurath is beyond their power.   Read More About The Lost Lands
 

Blossoms of Frost and Bone

  The cold in the Lost Lands comes from creatures called Blossom, amalgamated abominations of living ice, bone and carapace. None look like the other and their true nature is still debated by the scholars and slayers of Dhanû. When they gather into numbers, they form alien gardens of living ice and creeping corruption.   Read More About Blossoms      
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by Przemyslaw Krystaszek
   
Expeditions into the Lost Lands are most commonly launched by the Imaður, expert monster-hunters of Dhanû. These raids try to destroy Blossoms when they can and simply cull the hordes when they can not. Such attacks are perilous ventures and therefore bring great honor and prestige.
   
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Into the Deep

  Some speculate that the Ziggurath leads directly into the Far Deep, the deepest region of Araea yet found. The Far Deep is an alien world where humanity holds little ground and monstrous abominations hold court. It is a world of titanic caverns and vibrant, vicious wildlife.   The cynic thinks there is no hope or explanation to the Blossoms' reluctance to approach such a pathway - only the fear of a superior predator.    
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by Piotr Dura
   

Gods & Devils

  With the return of at least some fragmented information about the Ziggurath, legend and myth have once again begun to storm around the vast descent. Some hold it to be the house of gods or devils, or the remnant of lost civilizations. Other think the infamous and blasphemous mole-men of legend make the Ziggurath their warren.    
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by Carey Dunne
 
The Ziggurath is not empty. Something waits within it. Those who return still feel its voice in their dreams, like a razor across their mind.
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by 000Fesbra000

  What is the Ziggurath? How did it come to be?   Show spoiler
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The Likeliest and Most Reasonable Explaination by Giorgio Tsoukalos
  But...   Show spoiler
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The Truth As We All Know It! by Giorgio Tsoukalos


Cover image: by Mohamed Chahin

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6 Jul, 2019 19:41

Yet another good read. Well balanced between just info wall, engaging characters exploring and just spooky as heck location!

7 Jul, 2019 07:00

Thanks! :D

8 Jul, 2019 17:43

I absolutely love how you interspersed a bit of a story through this article. It's a great way to really add a tonne of character to an article. I really want to ask to see more information about Shibanvae's expedition, but I definitely think the way you've kept it mysterious like this works far better. Maybe a bonus article? hehe.     Also... it was aliens.     On to the Ziggurath it's self! I really really enjoy the picture you've painted with your words here. "a perfectly symmetrical pit carved out of the stone, vast in size and immeasurably deep" sounds incredible. I don't know if it's just me though, but there's a slight dichotomy between your description, and the images used! When I read "perfectly symmetrical pit", I think smooth, massive, and empty in the middle. A hole of darkness, with those massive massive steps down the edges like you described. A lot of the images used are of tunnels, columns, and those sorts of things. Are the images meant to show the path to the Ziggurath, or am I misinterpreting what the Ziggurath is supposed to look like?   Take that bit with a grain of salt, could definitely just be me!   One other thing I'd love to see more of (not sure where you'd fit it though, the article is already wonderfully formatting with everything fitting together perfectly) is more bits on ancient civilizations using the Ziggurath.   "Arch-ways hint of doors that lead into the structure itself"   More stuff like that! I love old mysterious civilizations, or ruins, and the Ziggurath seems like a place full of intrigue.     And again, it was definitely aliens.

8 Jul, 2019 18:23

Thank you so much for reading about it :D Maybe I'll add something about the expedition as its own article!   And yep: the images are more meant to be about the journey there - the last tunnel by gods & devil *might* be of the zig's interior.. But I'll leave that up to your imagination.   I'll see if I will ad something about the ancient civ - or leave it a complete mystery. It isn't certain how much people in the world knows about them. :D

8 Jul, 2019 17:46

I like it but the blossoms are vicious beasts that are very lethal but why is the main character relieved to know they can be a source of food. They are made from ice and bones, not meat?

8 Jul, 2019 18:10

There are more creatures there than just the blossoms, creature spawned from them or adapted to the arctic caverns. :)

8 Jul, 2019 18:33

If it that information was already in the text I'm stupid lol.

8 Jul, 2019 19:17

Not only I'm love with the mysterious feel of this article... I'm starting to get attached to the placeholder bug ;A;   The pacing between the bits of story and the article text is great, if not mesmerizing. Art work matches the feel, you can feel the descent deeper in you spine, mood is fabulous. Writing is superb! The description of the narrator when they describe the edge and the flow or their thoughts somehow really draws me in, and makes me want to take peek to to the ziggurath while my head shouts HELL NO on the background, That is good writing.   I feel such a brick for saying this though, as it's not about the content of the article, one thing DID distract me while reading this (this in my ADHD speaking). It's spacing and font sizes of the layout, which is such a weird thing to nitpick about, I'm sorry. =_=; When there is quote block, title block, text block, quote block, title block, etc, constantly varying font size and something about space that comes between the blocks, that makes my eyes bounce around, but that can really just be me problem. For me, it creates this effect where my eyes first try to jump from quote to quote and I need to actively stop myself to do that so I read all the things in between. I don't know, that might be just me, but I just put it out there in case someone else notices something similar. Not sure if it helps.

13 Jul, 2019 08:02

Pete, he grows on you (sometimes literally).   Thank you for the comment and reading it all :D I am glad you enjoyed the read!   Hmmm... I'll ask and solicit some information! See if anyone else have had such a problem.. Although I'm not sure what I would do with it even if there is. Having the same font?   <3

13 Jul, 2019 00:07

Great read as usual! I do have one criticism, and that is that the name "the Lost" carries— at least to myself— a connotation of a collective, not a singular location. As such, I had to read over every sentence where is was used multiple times as my mind thinks of a race or species rather than a location upon first glace.

  I reread the article to make sure I understood things— upon doing so I believe "the Lost" is slang for "The Lost Lands"? If this is the case, may I suggest referring to the title in full rather than the slang term— or at least leave a tooltip upon its first mention? It is quite confusing as is.

  Besides that, I enjoyed it! I could just about feel that cold darkness encroaching as I read.

We count our progress not in miles now, but in corpse.
A+ line right there.

13 Jul, 2019 07:59

Thank you! :D I am glad you liked it   I updated the article to use the full title as you suggested - indeed, the Lost are a enemy group in one of my favorite video games, so I can see how that can happen. :)   Thank you for reading and commenting, I greatly appreciate it. It is fun to know people are enjoying the stuff!