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Corpse-Walker's Inner Council - Gilded Doom

Wealth lets you get away with anything - even murder.  
— Gilded Doom
  Once a middling noble from an unremarkable merchant house, the Gilded Doom made a terrible bargain to join the Exterreri for reasons only known to few. Where other wields dread like a sword, she uses it as a scalpel to cut out what is most dear to her victims and makes them dance to her tune. While her methods are not as theatrical as flayed corpses or talking skulls, it is no less effective. When she meets the other Exterreri, she wears a gold-plated skull mask.   Gilded Doom is a skilled politician and acts like the Corpse-Walkers fixer. She uses fear, bribes and favors to make things happen. In her domain among the wealthy merchant elite of Mharaji, the Gilded Doom lacks for nothing except purpose.    
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  The Gilded Doom works in circles of power and influence, fixing deals and selling decadence to the wealthy. Among the Exterreri, she is called upon when more subtle means than brute force or grisly dread is needed. Through a combination of fear, bribery, and the favors of merchants across Mharaji, the Gilded Doom makes things happen and enforces the will of the Corpse-Walkers council. Other than Three-Skull, she has the fewest Bones, most of who are occupied with moving merchandise for her many deals.  

Such merchandise is typically slaves or narcotics, the latter of which Gilded Doom indulges in herself. She sometimes spends days locked away in smoke-filled dreams, watching and waiting for some greater purpose to reveal itself to her.   Gilded Doom works directly with Marrow to produce the hard-to-get ingredients for his experiments. Such things usually come from unknown parts of the Inner Shell or from the Far Deep, and Gilded Doom is on good terms with several teams of Kaia. None of them knows who she really is or who they are really working for, and she has yet to give them any reason for misgivings.
  Despite her success and importance to the Council, Gilded Doom seem to find little pleasure in either. For the time, she drifts along with the Corpse-Walkers      

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  Gilded Doom is well-liked by the other Exterreri and has traded favors with all of them. She takes no sides and plays no favorites, and together with Marrow is often the one to help build agreement among the quarrelsome council. Only Marrow knows the web of obligation and debts she has snared them in, though not what she intends to do with that influence. The others know that Marrow has some hold over the Gilded Doom and behind the pleasant smiles, she loathes him for it.  

Grandmother Death thinks of Gilded Doom as an adopted granddaughter through careful manipulation. It is a dangerous game played with the old hag, but it has afforded Gilded Doom a great deal of benefit. Should the Grandmother ever discover the deception, there's little telling what she would do.   Gilded Doom thinks little of Stitcher and fears Three-Skulls.
In him, she sees the same final fate as the Eater-of-Dead and avoids him when she can.   The Corpse-Walkers offer Gilded Doom protection from the enemies that first set her on the path to join the Exterreri. Only Marrow knows who they are and the thought of revenge against them burns in her chest like an ember, waiting to be fanned into obsession.  
House Daitau is the only merchant family where the Gilded Doom has no sway and will do no work. Whether their incestuous bonds of kinship makes them impossible to manipulate or if they are the enemies she is running from, only she knows.
 
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The Corpse-Walkers   Criminals and mystics, the Corpse-Walkers is a criminal syndicate fueled by dread and the powers wielded by their inner council. They leave the bodies of the slain at the doorstep of their relatives, still speaking the will of their slayers. They are feared even by other criminal gangs as dark and wretched; this fear is the weapon they've wielded to carve out an empire of sin.   Read More About The Corpse-Walkers


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Dec 2, 2019 18:02 by Stormbril

Cold, calculating, politician-esque crime lord, named Gilded Doom? Fantastic! I really appreciate that she seems detached from the world, with how she takes no pleasure in her success. Makes sense that she uses her own supply of narcotics, something that crime bosses are often shown to not do. Gotta feel something I guess? Or as you put it, wait for the greater purpose to reveal its self.   Only one thing stood out to me as worded a little bit weird:

Grandmother Death thinks of Gilded Doom as an adopted granddaughter through careful manipulation. It is a dangerous game played with the old hag but it has afforded Gilded Doom a great deal of benefit. Should the Grandmother ever discover the deception, there's little telling what she would do.
  It took me a second to realize that Gilded Doom had manipulated Grandmother Death into thinking of Gilded Doom as an adopted granddaughter. I'm not sure the best way to make it more clear -- just that I stumbled a little bit, reading this section. Could even just be a me-problem.   And, as with all the other Corpse-Walkers -- I wouldn't want to meet her. :P

Dec 2, 2019 18:25

Thank you so much :D And you'd be surprised how many criminals end up sampling their own stock - and it never ends well for them. Haha.   I'll think about some way to rewrite it! Thanks for pointing it out :D


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Dec 16, 2019 20:56 by Jacob Billings

You're writing is as wonderful as always; the Gilded Doom is a very interesting idea, making up an interesting character to read about and discover. There is hardly anything to critique on this article, though there are a few things that you may wish to rework a little.  

She uses fear, bribes and favors to make things happen.
Through a combination of fear, bribery, and the favors of merchants across Mharaji
  These two quotes are just sentences apart and have mostly the same content. It may be in your benefit to find some way to alter the words slightly or stretch their sentences apart. However, none of this detracts from the article.  
behind the pleasant smiles
  Perhaps change smiles to something with more emphasis on communication? I may be misunderstanding a fraction of it, but it sounds like, during her meetings with Marrow, she would be wearing a mask. The general lack of other physical description would also play into this.  
Grandmother Death thinks of Gilded Doom as an adopted granddaughter through careful manipulation.
  This sentence could perhaps be reworked, as it is a little unclear on who is doing the manipulation. With that, the "through careful manipulation" seems like a strange fragment to have at the end of the sentence. (Though it appears that has already been brought to your attention, though it dismisses the "could just be me" of Stormbril's comment)  
protection from the enemies that first set her on the path to join the Exterreri
  This is idea is brought up out of the blue mystery. It seems like a sudden thing to mention, breaking part of the mystery of the character. I was a bit surprised to find this so far down the page as well, as it would be easy enough to slip in a few sly comments in the opening where it perhaps mentions enemies.   Overall, it sounds like a rather interesting character to work with. The character is also markedly different than other members of the Corpse-Walker's Inner Council, visible from just this article.

Dec 17, 2019 11:11

Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll keep those things in mind when I get back to this article - there's definitely room for some tweaking there :)


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Sep 21, 2022 01:09 by JRR Jara

I like her!

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Sep 21, 2022 15:37

:D


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