Ismene Petraki Character in The World of Casting Stones | World Anvil
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Ismene Petraki

(a.k.a. Isolde)

She watched for the progression of pre-dawn, trying to stay neutral of its arrival. It was circadian, nothing more or less. And yet, she felt caught in an uncertain way between time and timelessness, unsure to which she belonged, and somehow, certain that neither remained to give her sanctuary. The clock had resumed, as if it had never stopped.
  What is it like to awaken from one hundred years of solitude to discover that the peace you thought you had made with your past was a lie?   The answer lies before Ismene Petraki, whether she likes it or not. (Incidentally, she doesn't.) Having spent the last one hundred years in the comfortable rhythms of a self-reliant life, Ismene isn't keen to rejoin humanity. Before retiring to the Watcher's tower, she enjoyed nearly a century of existence, and now feels satiated by her share of life experiences. She is not keen to subject herself once more to the vagaries of life.   Unfortunately for Ismene, the world is shifting. Her time as the Watcher, observing and subtly influencing the lives of key world figures from afar, has come to a close. It is her time to take the stage. To act, however, is a reality that Ismene has been isolated from for so long. The struggles of life have become so theoretical for her; the path she committed herself to in the serenity of her seclusion isn't as straightforward in the throes of reality.   As if real world travail wasn't enough, the onslaught of humanity confronts Ismene with another reality to grapple with: her past. What Ismene had assumed was buried in the shadows outside of memory touches her with ghostly fingers in the echo of modern sociality. The very factors of modernity that seek to relate to her all but forgotten world push her away. Ismene has exchanged her hermetic life for loneliness.   Mind, to merely exist, endure, and come to terms with her past is not the extent of Ismene's lot. All of the sacrifices she has made up until now point to one great, last sacrifice she must make. She has taken on the Watcher's mantle, and she must bestow its burden on another. With gentleness bespeaking an empathy only knowable by the long steeping of years, Ismene has been cradling a young woman in her succor. She laments that this new Watcher is hardly past a child, really, to be reft of her natural life under the weight of the world. Ismene has felt the way that the woman leans on her; she has felt how the sting of betrayal will afflict the woman's heart. In spite of this, necessity requires Ismene to abandon the last soul left she has the chance to love.   Peace is the lie that Ismene told herself.

Mental characteristics

Gender Identity

Female
Current Location
Ethnicity
Year of Birth
1832 198 Years old
Circumstances of Death
Ismene is taking her final journey. She has one last great task to fulfill, for the benefit of the world, after which she knows only death awaits her.
Children
Hair
long, with crinkled strands that time has leached all colour from
Height
tending diminutive; middling stature, aged
Weight
slight, but strong
Known Languages
Óasian, Miškaian, Velgrátan, and Oileán Súlish

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Dec 2, 2018 08:30 by Mihkel Rand

I recommend you move the stuff you've written about her weight and height under Body Features or General Physical Condition and use exact measurement on her weight and height. Also, you might want to give your world a name, because if you change it in the future and you have a bunch of articles linked to each other, then those old link won't work anymore as the article's URL uses the name of the world.   Keep up the good work!

Creator of Lethea and Pekkola

Maker of Maps
Dec 2, 2018 08:34 by Mihkel Rand

Also, I like the quote at the start. It's a nice touch and adds to the character's story.

Creator of Lethea and Pekkola

Maker of Maps
Dec 5, 2018 01:03

Hi! Thank you for the feedback! I have been putting off naming my novel series for a few years now, never mind the world it occurs in. I hemmed and hawed over its name when I created my world anvil account, settling on the untitled placeholder just so I could get writing. I didn't look to see how it affected the URL! I haven't come up with an actual world name, but I think my characters will find it to be implicit, so I'm not sure I really need one. However, your comment has inspired me to do some focused thinking about my writing, and I have come up with a name for my series that I hope will stick (and solves my URL issue). Thank you!

Dec 2, 2018 08:58

I really like this part:   "What is it like to awaken from one hundred years of solitude to discover that the peace you thought you had made with your past was a lie?"   It sets the tone for the issue the character she's facing quite nicely. Maybe this is clear if one knows more about the world, but is she an ancient figure moving into our modern world? Or is it a fantasy setting?   It's a pretty somber article. Life spent in solitude, with one last journey to take before the great unknown awaits.   Since it came up below (thanks for reading stuff Mihkel! :D ), I prefer descriptive measurements to exact ones, so go with what you feel tells the better story. :)   Does she have any powers? Time-magic or these Watcher abilities?


Creator of Araea, Megacorpolis, and many others.
Dec 5, 2018 01:11

Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm glad you liked that line. The setting is fantasy. I do address some changes she notices in the way the world has changed within my actual writing, but the changes aren't as dramatic in this world as they have been in the last century in ours. I needed to set a year in order to display my character's age, and in doing so, I think I inadvertently implied modernity. I may change the year calibration at some point, but presently, I don't have any cataclysmic events in my world's history that would make a rational point to measure time from.   Ismene does have some powers, associated with her role as the Watcher. This is my first published article, and I have not completed the articles pertinent to The Watcher and The Watcher's Tower yet. I'm working on it!

Dec 2, 2018 10:52

I didn't expect a character article written in prose, but it was awesome! Although it was a short read, it was an intense one. "Peace is the lie that Ismene told herself." is a great way to end the article, and somehow manages to imagine her personality more accurately.   I missed some descriptions of what is a Watcher exactly, it promises to be interesting, so I would love to read more about it! I tried clicking on The Watcher's Tower link, but it appears I can't access it.   Great job, see you around! :)

[they/them] Creator of Black Light, a science-fantasy universe.
Dec 5, 2018 01:14

Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it! I've got an article I'm working on for the Watcher as a role, as well as another one for the Watcher's Tower. This is the only article I have actually published so far. I'll try to finish those related articles soon, so that the content will link properly. :)

Dec 2, 2018 12:08

A simple but powerful article to say at least, I like how it's written and really enjoyed reading through it...But as a full character description, it feels a bit too little. While we get to learn about the character's current situation, I'm curious about things such as powers, education, experience with the other Watchers, etc. Maybe you could go deeper on those aspects.

Dec 5, 2018 01:21

Thank you for the feedback, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it! I definitely agree that I need more information. I'm hoping that I will be able to create that feel by linking related articles, especially as they relate to her role and abilities. It is hard to comment too much on her history, because of the way it plays out in my writing. This is a character who has gone well out of her way to discard her own memories of the past, and a lot of the drama of her storyline comes as she is brought to the remembrance of it. Her final journey and death are prophesied, so it is her history that waits to be revealed to a greater degree than her future.

Dec 5, 2018 02:36 by R. Dylon Elder

I lovr the style of writing you use and i wasn't expecting to enjoy a character i haven't really met or know much about but i did. It leaves me wondering about her and what she is or how she got there. This was the only thing i saw if your table of contents, i didn't know if that was intentional or not but all the same, great article and great writing. I dont like grammar checking buttt travel is spelled wrong i do believe in the forth paragraph below the box

Dec 5, 2018 02:55

Thank you for stopping by and sharing your thoughts! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading about my character. This is actually just my first article on this site, which is why the table of contents was otherwise empty. I'm hoping to paint a more complete picture of Ismene through other articles currently in a pre-published stage.   I'm completely on board with spelling/grammar checks and grateful! In this case, I actually did mean the word travail, as in painful or laborious effort, versus the word travel, which coincidentally applies as well. :)

Dec 5, 2018 03:02 by R. Dylon Elder

Lol i didn't know but it worked either way. Its a great start. Hope u keep at it cause now u got a follower lol

Dec 5, 2018 03:06

Thank you! :)