Adult Content Warning
This article contains Adult or otherwise sensitive content.
If you want to see this article please head to your Account Features
and deactivate the adult filter content.
Comments
Please Login in order to comment!
Aug 6, 2018 18:09
by Ashleigh D.J. Cutler
This article is very long, and while I had to keep coming back, it wasn't boring. It's an interesting take on the subject for sure. I can see the folklore influence clearly.
This is one of the more detailed and thought-out articles on pleasure demons I've read. My only major critique is that your tone sometimes switches jarringly between conversational and National Geographic, which takes away from the article. What is an example of a sexual and edgy pleasure demon name? I'm picturing something in the vein of Kill Six Billion Demons: 44 Arched Backs Supplicating Mutual Pleasure.
Check out my summercamp by going here and checking out any of my gold-star articles!
The NatGeo Thing, I guess I'm just so used to that style I don't notice... As for the names, that's on the right track, but not quite. They tend to be a bit more... direct. Some examples.
n'gelfrosith Kaash Ponnil d'thramel vosan (Womb that expels and seduces a dark kingdom)
Kurrani Poni ill l'vashi rk'kahkur (Great Master Whose Throne Lies Between Her Legs)
Knoyoa’n Pondraagu n’esslar (Giant-Swallowing Orifice)
N’Maast-Konhallas jitnesu Ill ragath Raag Xara’l (Waterfall of seed into a gaping cavern)
On the other hand, you have short form names like... 'Myosotis', 'Scarlet', or even stuff like 'Bubblegum'.
I love em
Check out my summercamp by going here and checking out any of my gold-star articles!