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Carriage

Carriages are defined in this world as drawn carts with often cushioned seating intended for transporting passengers. As the preferred method for transporting groups of people over distances, carriages can be found in nearly every country. Each one has their own style.  

Crecia

Carriages here are known for their open tops and having only two wheels instead of four. These carts are typically pulled by one horse and most well-to-do families will own one. They can seat between two and four people at once, depending on the size. The only exception to this is Dreitheos, which has carriages more in keeping with Lasposan style, due to the smog.  

Laspos

Lasposan carriages are opulent affairs. Four-wheeled and covered, carriages in the Empire are famous for their curtained glass windows and smartly dressed drivers. While the rich can and certainly do own their own, usually ornamented with gilding and elaborate hand carvings, there are also simpler carriages-for-hire that one can request the services of off the street. Horses pulling the cart always come in pairs, and the more a carriage has, the more affluent they are perceived to be.  

Lumin

In the fey country, carriages are really more akin to wagons, though being made completely of wood. Travelling alone in the Fey Forest, even along the path, is dangerous. As such, the Luminese people took on early the practice of moving in large groups, often taking their entire homes and livelihoods with them. Even after Lumin was established as a proper country and Sola Nightingale had made living there more viable and easier, some communities kept on with the caravan tradition.  

Barque

Because of the sun's oppressive heat, a fully covered carriage would be too stifling, but a fully open-air one would pose a serious risk of heat stroke over long periods. The people of Barque worked around this by having open-air two-wheeled carts with fabric stretched overhead to provide shade while still allowing plenty of airflow. As horses would be expensive to keep in such an environment, most carriages here are hand-drawn. Naga are the most common caddies to be found, because of their natural speed, smoothness of movement, and their hardiness to the sun's effects; it is not unusual to find other races pulling carriages as well, though.  

Finnaden

Similar in design to Lasposan carriages, the ones in Finnaden are significantly more simple in their design. Comfort is emphasized more here than show of wealth, and just about anyone can afford a ride to the other side of town rather easily. These carriages are single-horse drawn. They also feature a driver, though one here would probably never be caught dead in formal wear on the job.
Nickname
Fancy Wagon

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Jul 29, 2019 08:06

I really do like the detail here you have put into the carriages, and the excerpts are short enough so reading them all is not overwhelming. I appreciate that as a reader. It's so cool to have different regions with different carriage design for climates, a very nice touch. I will note, as I have done on a lot of articles, that this could benefit from a nice cover image and some pictures. The cover image can attract potential other viewers, and the pictures can add to your article to make it visually interesting!

Jul 29, 2019 08:25

Thanks so much for commenting! I can ask the cowriter about possibly doing some art for this, though I'm not sure if she'll be able to. I'm hesitant to use images from online as I'm not familiar with how to find permissions and such, but I'll see what I can do. Thank you so much for the advice!

Jul 29, 2019 10:45 by Sam Gyseman

I agree with what Jethro has said regarding your article on common transport. It's a well-written, concise description of each regional variant upon a theme. Though I'm finding it a little strange (not in a bad way) to use nagas as draught creatures. That I would like to see! It seems your cities would have a lot of horses to pull all of these carriages. How well-treated are they? What happens to all the manure on the streets? What would a typical carriage cost to buy and run? I sound like someone buying a car but that's a good comparison, I think :) Everyone in your world has a carriage, just as almost everyone on earth can access a car. I do like the vast range of places connected by a common item. Good article, well done!

Jul 30, 2019 05:44

I like how the nickname for them is "fancy wagon", I can see someone calling it that perhaps as a joke or a sarcastic comment.
I also like how each area has their own style of carriage, it helps make it feel like each area is their own place that developed their own ways of doing things (instead of a world that's caught a bad case of Planet of the Hats).
Perhaps you could elaborate on some of the smaller details in the sidebar. For instance, as Sam asked below, how are the horses treated? What is done about the waste they leave behind? I also agree with Jethro, that some art of different wagon types could also bring this article to life, especially if you alternate which side the drawing is on (so for Crecia's carriages the image would be on the left, for Laspos it'd be on the right, for Lumin back on the left, and so on - or the other way around).

Jul 30, 2019 10:51

I really liked the idea of developing the different styles of carriages available in your world. I wish you had given several alternative names, as the "fancy wagon" name doesn't quite fit with the description of some carriages like those of Finnaden. I really think having region-specific nicknames would do a lot for the article.   I was also intrigued by the naga carriers. Are naga intelligent creatures in your world? If so, do they demand pay? Are they slaves?

Jul 31, 2019 00:58

Thanks for the feedback! I will admit, I wrote "Fancy Wagon" in the alternative names section as a joke and left it in because I like to think I'm funny sometimes. Your idea of regional nicknames is a really good one, actually, so I'll definitely keep that in mind whenever I get around to reworking the article.   As for the naga, they are absolutely an intelligent and sapient race in this world. There are actually a few "animal-style" sapient species and they're more or less treated on the same level as humans. They most certainly get paid for their work.

Jul 30, 2019 18:22 by William Belley

Lumin and barque have nice explanations on them. I like it.   Aside from nagas with barque, is there any other known species used for travelling burden instead of horses ? Maybe in more boreal settings like yaks ? I'm curious to know.   Happy Summercamp !

Jul 31, 2019 01:02

Unfortunately, at this time, our only fixed boreal setting would be Yvesland which has smaller, more spread-out settlements that receive heavy snows during the winter. They don't really have proper carriages, the closest equivalent being dog sleds but I'm not sure I would include those in this article as they lack wheels and have an entirely different feel to them.   As of now, we don't have any other creatures that would be suitable cart-beasts, but who knows what the future holds.