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Sun's Rest

Written by TheExasperatedDM

"I'll do it myself." - Horizon Traveler
The story changes of how, or what the goddess said to the builders, however, one thing never changes.   The story goes like this; her 'most' devoted clergy wished to build her a grand temple and gathered everything necessary for the building. The clergy and builders began to argue about the design of the building. They prayed to the goddess asking for her to break the stalemate; to which, she appeared, looked over the plans, and spoke with the clergy and builders. They waited for her judgement on which design she wanted built. She looked at the place they picked and said "I'll do it myself."   There her grand temple stands.

Sensory & Appearance

The temple remains the same pleasantly warm temperature regardless of the time of year. Harsh winds turn into gentle breezes that flow through the building. The babble of the crowd is akin to a babbling river as even the most weary traveler could nap undisturbed.

Denizens

No people make their home here, however, many have called it so. The temple receives many visitors and regular worship from people of all types. This is one of the many temples that the Wayfarers are required to visit as it is a temple made by the goddess.

Contents & Furnishings

Pillows and rugs covers the floor with planks of solid wood are used for tables. Food and water is offered to travelers, and worshipers for no charge. The pillows and rugs never seem to fade, or un-fluff. It has been noted that the pillows and rugs come from many different cultures, including unrecorded.   The tapestries are affixed to the support rafters and drape to the floor. Most of the depictions on the tapestries are sunrises and sets with a single sun. There have been tapestries found with more than one sun, even depictions of moons along side the sun.   The strangeness of undocumented cultures, multiple suns and moons have attracted the attention of the Dark Mistress's Stargazers, Moon Magu's Watchers and Scholar's Keepers. They stay in local shrines to their respective deities and come to the Sun's Rest to document the strange.

Special Properties

Surrounding the temple are white circular stones that when knelt upon raise skyward. The stone stops below the cloud-line allowing the worshiper a view of the sun and surrounding area. The other stones never seem to get in the way of each other and have only been observed to move up, or down.   No matter the amount of people that enter the building, it never seems to be crowded. People have noticed that the time to walk the interior changes. People are able to pull a tapestry to the side to walk through and it is frowned upon by some of the clergy. The tapestry blocks out all weather and never soils when they are serving as walls.

Alterations

The bead walls have a variety of beads and the arrangement of beads have been observed to change by the goddess's hands, or the beads themselves. She has replaced and rearranged the tapestry walls. The tapestries drape from the support beams down to the floor and they are cared for by the clergy in her absence.   The purpose for the bead walls have been debated by everyone including the her own clergy. Scribes from the Dark Mistress, Moon Magu, and Knowing Lord are frequently at the temple observing and recording there arrangements as well as other strange occurrences.

Architecture

Long open air building, bead walls stretch down the length, the sun facing walls are open, tapestries depicting sunrises and sets serve as the north & south walls. The ceiling has revealed wooden arches and flooring is worn planks of wood, while the roof rests upon columns made of white stone. Circular white stones surround the building.
Type
Cathedral / Great temple


Cover image: by TheExasperatedDM

Comments

Author's Notes

The offerings place I have not considered where to place that in this temple. I am open to suggestions.


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Dec 3, 2018 06:35 by David Arthur Steele

You have mentioned that the goddess made the temple herself, but is there a regular clergy that maintains the place or handles regular prayers throughout the day / week / year?   Does the Horizon Traveler appear there regularly in divine or avatar form? If so, are people aware of whom they meet? Does she offer assistance outright, or is her style more subtle?   I like the open-air temple idea, but the tapestries on the north and south walls seem a bit odd, if they're backed by a beaded wall, as they would obstruct much of the lighting or airflow and wouldn't have much of a firm backing to hold them. Furthermore, how are they affixed to the wall?

Dec 3, 2018 20:26

Regular clergy maintains it and I'm still working out more details for each deity's clergy. Those second paragraph question I think should go on her article. The tapestries are the walls.....abit handwaving magic. They hang down from support beams, and block all the weather outside just as a normal wall would.

Dec 4, 2018 02:09 by David Arthur Steele

Excellent. Hand-Wavey is perfectly fine, as long as you think of it before readers/players.

Dec 3, 2018 08:01 by Tikal

So this is where you use the vignette. Let that be your opening story and tell your story however you need to. You can talk about the god that created the temple there.   Then let the god be its own page.   A nice Vignette or quote at the beginning really helps open these things up. It would help to provide some context as well.

Dec 3, 2018 10:00

Suggestions and thoughts: Tell us a story about who lives here and what their days are like. What do they eat? What chores do they do? What do they do in the small hours of the day?   Also, I always like to see a quick overview at the very beginning of the article. Something that tells us what the place is, what it's about and why we should be interested in broad strokes.   As for what section to put the god-architect under; don't forget, you can always make your own headers! :)   Keep on rocking WE! :D


Creator of Araea, Megacorpolis, and many others.
Dec 3, 2018 10:04

I suggest you start using the Vignette as a way to give readers a generic introduction to the article. You can follow Wikipedia's example for this: the introduction is a short summary of the rest of the article so that readers can have the general idea of the whole thing before reading the details. Adding a quote somewhere in the article will also help to get the in-world perspective to this place.   The bead walls change arrange sometimes on their own -> I think either "change" or "arrange" should be removed here.   I did find the content in some sections too short. When you have a whole section with a single sentence, it looks ugly, even if there's no need to write anything else in it. In this cases, you have several options: quotes, art or expand the sentence. But of course, that's just a formatting/aesthetic thing :)   Have fun with WorldEmber, and see you around! :)

[they/them] Creator of Black Light, a science-fantasy universe.
Dec 3, 2018 20:18

Thanks for reading and commenting. I fixed the sentence and added more to the article.