May-be This Could Be Done Better

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May 2025 Rewrite Challenge

  Sharpen thy quills and warm up the edit button: this May the worldbuilding community invites you to polish past glories rather than chase fresh word-count. From May 1st to May 31st 2025 we’ll be rewriting and refining existing articles, proving that even cherished lore can shine a little brighter.  

How to take part

Choose your articles: Anything already published before April 30th 2025 counts.   Make it better: Re-organise headings, rewrite text, add pronunciations, art, side-bars, adventure seeds - whatever “better” means for the piece.   Log your rewrites: (optional) At the bottom of each article add the line: "Rewritten for May-be 2025 (Copper/Silver/Gold attempt)" or something like that.   Submit: post links or blocklinks to the article(s) at the bottom of this page (comments section) before june 1st.   Talk about it: if you send notifications, add these tags: #MaybeBetter #UnofficialChallenge   For 1, 3, or 5+ rewritten articles you earn a copper, silver, or gold badge:  
May-be Better 2025 - Copper

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May-be Better 2025 - Silver

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May-be Better 2025 - Gold

id: 6591799


Cover image: scribes-article-header by Tillerz using MJ

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Apr 26, 2025 16:17 by CoolG

This would be really helpful for me! I have so many outdated articles XD

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Apr 26, 2025 19:14 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

Great idea for a challenge :)

Emy x
Explore Etrea | March of 31 Tales
Apr 26, 2025 20:48 by Chase

I really need something like this for my Astnyr articles! I want to participate in this one so much.

"I will do as you bid, Lunarius," -Eldrinor Nocturne
Apr 26, 2025 22:33 by Ephraïm Boateng

This is cool, I'm gonna participate

Apr 27, 2025 02:30

I have a few articles in dire need of dusting off, so I may very well use this opportunity to touch them up!

The Eternal Hymn sounds into perpetuity on Nascindor
Apr 27, 2025 09:58

Oh yeah, sounds perfect …

Apr 28, 2025 04:16

Great idea.   Unfortunately, do everything perfect on my first try. 8)   Or more accurately, I pretty much tinker with my old articles in small increments all the time. I'll see if any of my old articles needs LOTS of TLC

May 4, 2025 21:03

I found an older article that has lots of material that is now contradicted by my newer material. I trimmed some stuff, added stuff, fixed typos, and added a lot of pictures plus a flavor quote.

Greymoria spiritually affiliated creatures
Myth | May 8, 2025

broad overview of creatures Greymoria helped shaped

May 1, 2025 17:08 by Tynen The Mighty

Just did my first one. Cleaned up the sections, and added a list of the office holders so the reader can get a better sense.  

Chancellor of America
Rank/Title | May 7, 2025

May 5, 2025 20:40 by Tynen The Mighty

First silver attempt for the "May-be This Could Be Better" Challenge. Cleaned up the content trees, added details, and updated the images  

Lexington
Organization | May 7, 2025

May 5, 2025 20:42 by Tynen The Mighty

My second silver attempt. Added the political banner, and the name in Spanish. Please let me know if I translated it wrong

Queen's Party
Organization | May 7, 2025

May 5, 2025 20:43 by Tynen The Mighty

First gold attempt. Added the political parties as hyperlinks to their articles. Messing around with the BB Code lol  

Kingdom of America
Organization | May 18, 2025

May 5, 2025 20:44 by Tynen The Mighty

Final gold attempt. Added a map and a few extra links  

Sequoyah
Settlement | May 12, 2025

May 2, 2025 21:16

Thanks for hosting this challenge, I wanted to tackle this article for a while - here is a tale from the sands:  

The fall of Harran
Myth | May 7, 2025


Sit down, my friend, and let me tell you of Aran'sha . A world where the sands shift and the stars sing, where the wind carries secrets and the twin moons keep silent vigil over it all.
May 16, 2025 13:46

Second and third article:

Serpent's Root
Species | May 16, 2025

A cruel twist of hope in the desert, a plant of salvation and despair - behold the Serpent's root.

Date Harvest Festival
Generic article | May 16, 2025


Sit down, my friend, and let me tell you of Aran'sha . A world where the sands shift and the stars sing, where the wind carries secrets and the twin moons keep silent vigil over it all.
May 3, 2025 13:19

Here is my submissions for the challenge :)

May-be This Could Be Done Better
Generic article | May 18, 2025

May 3, 2025 23:32 by Chase

Eldrinor Nocturne
Character | May 3, 2025

"I will do as you bid, Lunarius," -Eldrinor Nocturne
May 6, 2025 19:33 by Chase

Alexander Moonfury
Character | May 18, 2025

"I will do as you bid, Lunarius," -Eldrinor Nocturne
May 6, 2025 23:51 by Owen Davies

Thanks for the challenge Tillerz! It was great to even start looking back on this challenge! Sending my hub of different articles that I plan to KEEP updating as I go on!  

May-Be Challenge 2025
Generic article | May 6, 2025

Nonvyrox A fantasy setting scarred by a divine war.
May 9, 2025 08:08

Oh, making an article to collect them all is soooo smart ... Also, how do you change the width of the article block?!

May 10, 2025 09:47 by Owen Davies

So in my article I have them in columns using containers. Then It just works!

Nonvyrox A fantasy setting scarred by a divine war.
May 10, 2025 14:54

Thank you, sometimes it is so easy

May 7, 2025 18:54 by Chase

Lyria Silverwind
Character | May 7, 2025

"I will do as you bid, Lunarius," -Eldrinor Nocturne
May 7, 2025 22:04

Ooh, this is a great challenge to have just before Summer Camp!


Fly high, Guardian. o7
— Nulcheck ¦ Dragonguard Legend
May 12, 2025 21:41

I don't know you'll do this every May from now on, and if not, I wouldn't mind taking over, but that aside — I've created an article to list everything, similar to what I've done with official challenges. I'll update it once I actually get around to redoing some articles. :)  

Rewrite Challenge 2025
Generic article | May 18, 2025

Rewrite Challenge 2025 Entries


Fly high, Guardian. o7
— Nulcheck ¦ Dragonguard Legend
May 11, 2025 03:44

We will give this a go!

Talent
Generic article | May 11, 2025

May you find the truth as it billows through the branches...
May 16, 2025 03:02

A little bit more, well adding more anyway. Giving folks quite a bit more direction in where more information can be found.

The Elsewhere
Organization | May 16, 2025

A separate plane of existence parallel to the Great Tree, though a reflection warped, which is which?

May you find the truth as it billows through the branches...
May 19, 2025 11:57 by CoolG

This rewrite took weeks, but here it is!!

Izwelezo Sector
Settlement | May 19, 2025

The megalopolis recognized as pioneers in Noxtech and celebrated for its innovative technology and software advancements.

Explore the dark and mysterious Inferncenem, the bright and wonderful Caelumen, the dark but magical Ysteria, the vibrant and bustling Auxul or the world of contrasts Mytharae!   Have a good one!   Join the Discord and chat with like-minded people!
May 20, 2025 14:38 by Enoris Leinwand

This is super cool, do you plan to have it again next year ?

May 20, 2025 20:02 by Tillerz

Possibly? We'll see. :D

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