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The Ruins of Kojas

I write down these observations as to make it clear for me what our actions will bring forth, not all places and events i see are so strong that i am sure they will happen but few were as vivid as this one.     I am sure everyone reading this, no matter when, will have at least heard about the mighty city of Kojas. Build by us in the dawn of this world, we filled it with a nation who surpassed and will surpass any in martial prowess. And foolishly we forgot to ensure that it would remain stable not just in the near, but also the distant future.   As we intended and expected, the Drakons will be a match for the angels and stand their ground, but we might have overestimated how solid the ground would really be. They will fight and the fight will break it all, the Drakons will shatter and with them their city in a cataclysm brought forth by war that will become civil war. This i saw clearly.   The city will be broken in war and ancient catacombs beneath it will be laid open again. In these, darkness reigns supreme and even my sister has no real grip on those that dwell there. To guard their knowledge and treasures, the Drakons stripped volunteers of their Souls and gave them shape beyond death. These guardians are unseen to the eyes of most, as they only reveal their firey or shadowy form to those that they choose and most of those that do see them have no chance to talk of it.   When Kojas will be broken, the sun will wake the beings beneath and they will walk out into the dead city. The streets will seem empty but might be full of ancient souls. Even down in their catacombs the Shades and Blazes have seen what the Angels brought down upon their descendants, friends and siblings.   So take take care, you innocent travelers. They might hate the Angels but this hate will never pass, it makes them like predators who smell blood. They will kill humans, or any others that might come, but i guarantee you the will do worse should any Angel set foot within the ruin.  
Observation of whats to come #1/Lady of Dawn
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Mountain / Hill
Related to: Kojas, City of the Dracul

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Jun 28, 2018 15:12 by Dimitris Havlidis

Since it's a location i would most certainly would like to know more about it. The prose is great but not worldbuilding material. Do you intent to write something on it? If not why not use the prose template?

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Jun 28, 2018 22:19

See the problem here was i wanted to write something about the City that was in the future, so i used the Character with precognivity to write about its condition in the now.

Jun 28, 2018 23:12

Great prose, but how do the prophesied changes affect it's surrounding? I gather from the other comments that you have a separate article on the city now, but you might want to add a link to that in the article.

Jun 29, 2018 07:33

She sometimes intentionally changes the future (thats the plot of this story) but generally events this great cant be avoided, also she intentionally doesnt give detail that would enable people to find out what would need to change.