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Dancing Lights

Lie of the Dancing Lights

Beware the Dancing Lights
Flipping about in the Dark
Playing in a Child's Sight
Here the Children will Part   They Follow the Dance
Into the Wilde They Go
The Children Love to Prance
And Play To and Fro   Lost in the Caves
The Lights Lead Astray
With one Last Wave
The Children went Away
The Dancing Lights Lead
And the Children Follow
Into the Demon Seeds
The Children Become Hollow   The Lights fill the Holes
As Demons begin to Sing
The Children Lose their Souls
Into the Heart they Bring   Soon the Army will Rise
And Children will Return
As Demons in Disguise
And Crevice will Burn
— Selvin Korithia
 

Myth of the Dancing Lights

  There is an ore found on the Guild Stratum that creates a dust that sparkles as it floats around. These Dancing Lights, as they became called, would float around randomly and at first became a novelty to look at. It soon became a distraction and the Kyren decided to purge the lights from the city. The Dancing Lights still exists outside of the city. In the first few years, some would enter the Wilde to see the Dancing Lights. Sadly, the Wilde is an untamed and unexplored area and many never returned. The worst were the children that were enthralled by the lights and would follow them and be lost. This created a public outcry to try and protect the children and led to many failed ideas.

Lights of the Wilde

The Wilde is the name of the unexplored caves of the Guild Stratum. The Wilde is dangerous and many lives are lost to it. The further you get away from the city, it becomes far less likely of coming back. The maze of caves becomes too difficult to navigate back.

Selvin Korithia

Selvin was a father and lost his daughter to the Dancing Lights. He decided he would keep his last child safe in the only way he could. He told his son the story of the Dancing Lights. The story detailed a plan by demons to lure children away and take their souls. It was a simple story, but effective in keeping his son away. The story moved around the Cavern and slowly became a common story told to children to prevent them from wandering away into the Wilde.

Stories of the Dancing Lights

Selvin would later write several books about the Dancing Light and many became more twisted as he wrote. These books did not become as popular as his first story and have become hard to find. His children became worried about him and convinced him to stop writing. There are rumors of a half written manuscript held by his ancestors to this day. They have refused to release it as they say it would tarnish a good man's name.

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Jul 25, 2019 18:28 by Grace Gittel Lewis

First thing I noticed? NICE color choice for your CSS here!
  Small formatting nitpick— in your opening quote you have a line break after "The Children went Away" which starts the second half of the story one line downwards— offset.
  I do like the story, besides that!
 

A story was a plan by demons to lure children...
"The story detailed a plan by demons..." would get your point across better, I think— as it is I had to reread the line a number of times to figure out what you were trying to say.
  I do like the idea here a good bit, this light, dusty ore that light dances off of— luring children. What a perfect thing to twist into a frightening tale to keep them away!
  A nice article, all said and done— just a few minor grammar mistakes (I elected not to point them all out as some can be annoyed by that), I don't have questions to ask— as you've explained everything here fairly well!

Jul 25, 2019 19:35

I'm fine with grammar corrections, it's one of my great weaknesses. :)   I had the break in there because when I looked at it on mobile it merged them together...but I assume most will look at it on a pc...so I'll remove the break. Thanks.

Jul 26, 2019 04:28

I love the rhyme!! I really did. Like the idea that the Dancing Lights are a natural phenomenon and the disappearances are result of the dangers of the Wilde and not for a sentient evil creature or creatures. You talk about Selvin a father that lost his daughter and write a story about it, next you continue with him but like open to develop more the character. I suggest that you leave the initial part and the next part take it in the Selvin page (If you want to develop him) instead in the stories section you can write some legends, rumors or even the "ramblings of an entire town tired of the evil behind the dancing lights" Like the idea of making them more terrifying only in the minds of the people. Congrats!!

Jul 26, 2019 13:40

I hadn't really considered developing him anymore than that. He is a historical character and I just wanted to give him a bit more history, but is limited to this story as a whole.

Jul 26, 2019 09:14

That was a really nice story. I would like to know more about this "ore" that was found. What kind of metal is it? Are they still harvesting it, despite the dancing lights? Since everybody by know knows not to follow the lights, are they mostly ignored, or are they still trying to get rid of them?   I also really liked the twist of how the father went darker and darker with subsequent stories, that was pretty neat!

Jul 26, 2019 13:45

I might do a separate article on the ore, not sure yet. The ore has been completely removed from the city section, but the outer caves have not been completely cleared. The city leaders don't really want to put the resources into clearing the caves. Currently you might have one or two go missing every five years or so. It is no longer considered an emergency by most.   The biggest threat is during a quake that might open up new openings that no one has explored. The primary exits out of the city are guarded, but a new opening could draw in curious people.   Glad you liked it!