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Change "Presented Sex" to "Presenting As" on the Character article template

User Interface (UI) / User Experience (UX) · Articles & templates · Created by Silverlite_Sword
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Characters Gender Presentation LGBTQ+ GSM

What functionality is missing? What is unsatisfying with the current situation?

  People don't really present as a particular sex. A person's sex is a medical category, including genitals, hormone levels, and other sex characteristics. This information is usually not immediately discernible upon a visual inspection, and would need to be disclosed by someone in a conversation.   The word for "how you appear to strangers" is gender presentation, often shortened to just presentation. The current label is just simply factually incorrect based on the current usage of the words "sex" and "gender."   As someone who is trans and likes to write transgender characters, having "presented sex" as the label can be confusing, as secondary sex characteristics do not necessarily have to match the clothes that someone wears. What is the "presented sex" of someone who wears a dress, heels, and makeup, but is flat chested, has a deep voice, and has some stubble on their face? If we are going by the accepted meaning of sex - i.e. one's biological features - the answer should technically be "male." This doesn't seem to fit the intended use of the section, though.

How does this feature request address the current situation?

  Changing the label to "presenting as" renders it more correct and helps distinguish sex from gender in a more GSM friendly way. (GSM stands for gender and sexual minorities, another label for the LGBTQ+ community that doesn't require continually adding letters.)  

What are other uses for this feature request?

It allows the "Presented Sex" sidebar tag to have more uses than just gender. An alien could be "Presenting As" a human or Eowyn could be "Presenting as" a Rider of Rohan, to give a few examples.

Follow up


After a discussion on Discord, I am in support of having "sex," "gender," and "presentation" categories in the sidebar, with the current "gender identity" section under Mental being converted to an article block.

The Team's Response

After the conversation on Discord and an internal discussion with all the members of our team we came to the following solutions   The following sections will be added to a new section under basic or new tab
  • Add Sex (right sidebar)
  • Add Gender (right sidebar)
  • Rename Presented Sex >to Presentation (right sidebar)
  • Gender Identity (left full content)
  • Sexuality (left full content)
  •     ======   There is a conversation taking place in Discord regarding this topic here:   https://discord.com/channels/348060277989965844/413706576470474753/939367330381693010 (#development-feedback channel)      
    Current score

    85/300 Votes · +12250 points

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    • +20

      by Decivaern, Destroyer of Worlds
      on 2022-02-25 02:50
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      by Luthcoth
      on 2022-02-24 05:07
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      by DMJojo
      on 2022-02-24 03:04
    • +300

      by Zemandur
      on 2022-02-23 15:36
    • +300

      by Angantyr
      on 2022-02-23 13:35
      I'm upvoting this to increase the chance of the request resulting in a change, but think the field should rather be split at the very least to Sex/Sexuality and Gender, since they describe two different things.
    • +100

      by Jontaro
      on 2022-02-23 13:23
    • +300

      by Sodose
      on 2022-02-23 12:29
    • +50

      by Wombatcausehwynot
      on 2022-02-22 00:42
    • +20

      by Guerulfus
      on 2022-02-20 22:08
    • +50

      by BurningGod
      on 2022-02-20 21:24
    • +300

      by A Filthy Velociraptor
      on 2022-02-19 20:14
    • +50

      by Walicia
      on 2022-02-19 08:06
    • +50

      by AJWithall
      on 2022-02-19 03:34
    • +300

      by Bluboram
      on 2022-02-19 02:23
    • +300

      by Sach2000
      on 2022-02-18 16:46
    • +300

      by Vaporstrike19
      on 2022-02-18 03:40
    • +300

      by diskid08
      on 2022-02-17 16:52
    • +300

      by BlooberryPi3
      on 2022-02-17 00:33
    • +300

      by BARON229
      on 2022-02-16 15:56
    • -300

      by A Beloved Bananafolk
      on 2022-02-15 19:30
    • +300

      by Ezrageric
      on 2022-02-14 19:14
    • +200

      by 713Moose
      on 2022-02-13 20:57
    • +300

      by WeirdCorvo
      on 2022-02-13 04:57
    • -100

      by A Fluffy Kitten
      on 2022-02-12 18:43
    • +200

      by A Goodhearted Hobbit
      on 2022-02-12 18:13
    • -10

      by ParkerDouglas
      on 2022-02-12 15:10
    • +300

      by restlessGalaxy
      on 2022-02-12 10:44
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      by rivventhedm
      on 2022-02-11 21:16
    • +100

      by spartacus007
      on 2022-02-11 20:53
    • +200

      by RNouveau
      on 2022-02-11 19:21
    • +300

      by mezzopatricia
      on 2022-02-11 05:59
      Yeah. I think what got landed on in the Discord is right.
    • -300

      by Ailill Blackwood
      on 2022-02-10 19:54
    • +100

      by Keith Dorn
      on 2022-02-10 13:54
    • +300

      by ArchCon
      on 2022-02-10 07:54
      I find myself most in line with Spartango's suggestion of quick sidebar facts and then an in depth text field to be filled out as needed. I'm a bit torn as to whether "sex" should be included in the sidebar. I would prefer to simply fill out "gender" and "pronouns" for sidebar, finding "sex" too similar to having someone ask whether I've had "the surgery." That's between me, my doctor, and anyone I choose to be intimate with. However, each of these fields is optional and it may be important for some to include each field. Ultimately I think the addition of these fields would be a positive step towards inclusivity.
    • +300

      by Timekeepers
      on 2022-02-09 19:40
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      by anamis18
      on 2022-02-09 19:14
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      by Nugget909
      on 2022-02-09 19:07
    • +20

      by KOPPEN
      on 2022-02-09 16:06
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      by braintird
      on 2022-02-09 11:07
    • -200

      by A Beloved Dragon
      on 2022-02-08 14:58
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      by Attacus
      on 2022-02-08 10:19
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      by A Adorable Dimensional Horror
      on 2022-02-08 00:20
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      by DotingCourtier
      on 2022-02-06 19:54
    • -20

      by A Mischievous Dryad
      on 2022-02-06 10:49
      Gender is a trait, not an identity. Same as your height, skin and hair color. Anyone can observe your sex and its effect on you, and the idea of gender is an observation of sex. Identity is something you develop through the choices you make in your life. Sex develops on its own, outside of your control. Why is this poll even a thing?
    • +50

      by A Beloved Cthulhu
      on 2022-02-06 07:36
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      by KrostaTina
      on 2022-02-05 22:13
      Even from the point of view of someone who also write adult content, I don't feel the need of a section to specify the sex assigned at birth to my characters. That can be specified, if needed, in the body of the article. "Gender identity" and "Pronouns" are more significative and a "Presentation" field can help to qualify at first glance how they relate with others, with the chance to expand it in the article. I really only think that "Presented sex" is an awkward wording for how I and most people would use that field.
    • -300

      by UnknownWriter88
      on 2022-02-05 21:25
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      by Everwild
      on 2022-02-05 17:13
      Personally, I feel this has become very convoluted (on the template, to clarify). The terms "Gender" and "Sex" are synonymous, if you're to believe the dictionary definitions, and therefore redundant. Since it appears to be a simple text field, I would mark the current "Presented Sex" as just "Gender", because we then have the freedom to simply write in our own terms: Male. Female. Asexual. Trans-woman. Non-binary, GSM, etc. THEN, I would organize the fields under the Mental tab with the information that can be expanded upon, such as sexual orientation, presentation, gender identity, or preferred pronouns, and so on (I realize pronouns are on the sidebar). I suggest "Gender" rather than "Sex" because to me, it's the more open, more fluid, and broader term. I would like to see a field added for orientation where I could just drop something like "poly amorous" as a single word descriptor that would show up in the sidebar, and that I could also expand on in the detailed Mental section if I so chose. But, that's just me (and I make up my own sidebar information anyhow).
    • +10

      by Artofeliza
      on 2022-02-05 17:10
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      by TheBlindGamer
      on 2022-02-05 15:48
      I would really prefer a "Presents as" field as well as a "sex" field so those that wish to use either or both can do so. Some characters may present as masculine but be female whilst using he/him pronouns, others may be intersex (hermaphroditism- presenting with both male and female genitals) but identify as non binary so present as neither/nongender. Either way if we only get 1 field I rather have "Presents as" and stick their genitals in the article somewhere.
    • +300

      by PrincessHoneytea
      on 2022-02-05 14:55
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      by A Rambunctious Mlem
      on 2022-02-05 10:32
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      by Felixora
      on 2022-02-05 09:25
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      by arty
      on 2022-02-05 09:15
      I'm glad to have stumbled upon this suggestion! There's no need in my opinion to have any mention of a character's sex show up in the sidebar at all because as you described, this is not something that is apparent at a glance for most characters - and the sidebar, to me, is a section of the article that summarizes the features/aspects of a character that are noticeable at first glance. "Presents as" could be a good new label for the field in question. A little blurb explaining the intentional use and possible alternative uses of this field on the article editing page should clear up all confusion on the side of the creator of the article. (Many fields already have such blurbs that give context to the field label.) Fields that could and should take up more space than a few words belong into the article body, where the writer can elaborate on more complex topics.   Also thank you so much for making me aware of the GSM acronym. I haven't seen it before and as someone who struggles immensely with getting the letters of long acronyms into the correct order when typing/speaking from memory, this is going to make my life a lot easier.
    • +300

      by FenDawnchild
      on 2022-02-05 08:16
    • -10

      by RosieFox
      on 2022-02-05 06:18
      I personally agree with many of the other comments that having a “sex” field and a “gender” field in the sidebar would be most helpful. There is already a sidebar section for pronouns so that’s already available. As a person not always fluent in the lingo of today, just having a “presenting as” field is too vague and I think it could also be confusing to people new to the platform who aren’t sure what it’s for.
    • +300

      by Isaac Thompson
      on 2022-02-05 06:02
      Echoing the thoughts of many so far - Having a field for Sex, Gender, Pronouns, and then a larger section available for more in-depth description of the character's gender expression and presentation. It shouldn't need to be more complex than that for most peoples needs. If someone does need things to be more specific, they can add fields to the sidebar with key values, or headers to the main body, without the large amount of fields possible confusing users who don't need all of them.
    • -300

      by A Roaring Dwarf
      on 2022-02-05 05:43
    • -10

      by A Beloved Devil
      on 2022-02-05 05:27
      I think the standard boxes of sex, gender & pronouns are enough to appear in the sidebar and would fit most peoples needs. In the main body/vignette this can be explained and expanded, in a personal history field for instance. And with bbcode any other option can be placed in the sidebar or vignette. (Also note, you don't have to use the boxes if it is not relevant to your world building or you want something else.)
    • +200

      by Shadow Malachi
      on 2022-02-05 05:02
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      by A Frightened Cthulhu
      on 2022-02-05 04:46
      I agree with spartango, A Fluffy Elf, Monkos, and zpires' suggestions.
    • +200

      by Audrey Azura
      on 2022-02-05 04:46
      I think it is a great idea! I was a bit cold at the start, but it definitely add some more creative liberty while still keeping the intended purpose. I think it is important to keep a field for that in the sidebar, as it represents basically the first impression of the character, and will more useful than a long developed text on the question to have a refresher on the character.
    • +300

      by zpires
      on 2022-02-05 04:34
      my recommendation: Sex, on the sidebar, for assigned sex at birth. Gender identity, also on the sidebar, for gender identity Gender presentation, in the main body under the Social category, for how said gender identity plays out on physical, social, romantic/sexual, and personal levels.
    • +10

      by A Fluffy Elf
      on 2022-02-05 04:28
      Personally, a sidebar option for sex, another for gender, and a field for gender presentation (not in the sidebar) would be preferable. People could choose which field they would like to fill out for each particular character, and go into depth about how one might present themselves in the bulk of the character article under gender presentation.
    • +300

      by Ademal
      on 2022-02-05 04:27
      I would just name the field "Presentation", rather than "Presenting As", because that's a more common nomenclature.
    • +10

      by Monkos
      on 2022-02-05 04:25
      I agree with spartango's suggestion - brief fields for sex, gender, and pronouns serve for the at-a-glance nature of the sidebar, followed by a more in-depth body-text prompt for the more in-depth topic of gender expression and presentation.
    • +10

      by spartango
      on 2022-02-05 04:21
      My vote goes to having {sex, gender identity, pronouns} as options for the sidebar and then a {gender expression/presentation} option to be placed in the body. Gender expression is so easy to fluctuate from day to day, or even throughout a single day, that if it's important enough to mention in an article, it should probably be given the appropriate space to go into detail.
    • +300

      by wolfoflight2003
      on 2022-02-05 04:00
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      by 339X
      on 2022-02-05 03:54
    • +10

      by Robotics5
      on 2022-02-05 03:54
      Personally I think it would be best to have it just be gender
    • +300

      by Ratha
      on 2022-02-05 03:31
    • +100

      by jkmcne
      on 2022-02-05 01:39
    • +50

      by A Cute Dryad
      on 2022-02-05 01:10
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      by A Fierce Orc
      on 2022-02-05 00:35
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      by Michael Chandra
      on 2022-02-04 23:26
    • +10

      by idki
      on 2022-02-04 22:34
    • -300

      by Scalenex
      on 2022-02-04 22:20
      I don't think this is necessary. It seems to be getting deep into the weeds of semantic categories.   For characters who are not binary, there is already an option in the character template for explaining this nuance. In fact, right under presented sex it says the following: 'If you want to expand on Sexuality or Gender Identity, fill the prompts under the "Mental" tab.'
    • +200

      by A Fierce Dragon
      on 2022-02-04 22:15
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      by Morison
      on 2022-02-04 21:49
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      by GregorMcleod
      on 2022-02-04 21:22
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      by Cyborg Starfish
      on 2022-02-04 18:49
      As a fellow trans person the whole 'presented sex' thing is just incredibly weird to me. Glad to know I'm not the only one in this. I hope it gets addressed.
    • +200

      by A Lusty Unicorn
      on 2022-02-04 18:48
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      by Serukis
      on 2022-02-04 18:44
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      by Qurilion
      on 2022-02-04 18:42
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      by SolarCat02
      on 2022-02-04 18:40
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      by Silverlite_Sword
      on 2022-02-04 18:07