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Jacob Billings

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The sun of summer warms the air, filling it with joy as the children come out to play. I lay out the blanket and set down the wicker picnic basket, leading her forward to her seat, still blissfully unaware of why she came. 

She sits only until I do, clasping my hand and solemnly looking into my eyes. But I’m still blind, jovial and bright. I hardly hear her words, only grasping the last one: “apart.”

It’s as if the world freezes. The sunshine fading as reality comes crashing down. 

“We should spend some time apart.”

I beg her to stay, but she drops the black marble I gave her, a promise of my eternal love, and vanishes with the wind.

This is a project from one of the classes. The assignment was to write 7-10 pieces of flash fiction that handeled one overarching idea/theme, I used loneliness as the basis of it.
  It's not really connected to my worlds, so all I can ask you to do is to let me know what you think of it.
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