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This entry is for something that hasn't happened yet in the story, but I'm hoping to build toward as I keep writing. It's a rough outline of what could come to pass. Click the button below to travel to this potential future, or use the top navigation bar to retreat to safety.— Note from the author
information on the fatal condition the protagonist suffers from
we don't learn about this until muuuuuch later
we'll first see protag deal with THE SYMPTOMS at various points
they'll start to regain some memories that suggest at THE FACTS
eventually they'll be able to piece it all together, likely with help
THE FACTS
people with the money for it had designer babies
these were also people with the money to not need to give birth themselves -- these babies were artificially inseminated, then grown in an artificial womb, with genetic modification during development
the most guaranteed modifications were to remove known illnesses and to modify the baby's eventual appearance
the less guaranteed ones were related to natural talent and intelligence
once the babies started growing up, a concerning trend was noted
many of them displayed the same symptoms of an unknown chronic illness
and many of them, as adults, began dying
the process had created a new congenital disease
it was fatal, and had no cure
THE SYMPTOMS
this needs to be something that comes and goes
each time it becomes more severe and lasts a little longer, and eventually it becomes too severe to be survivable
the obvious option is something with the heart. heart racing, hands shaking, can't catch your breath, intense fatigue, can't focus. like there's a giant hand inside your chest, gripping your heart and lungs so neither function correctly
could be temporary paralysis? start off losing all feeling to a foot or something, then it comes back. Over time, more becomes numb and stays numb for longer. eventually the whole body shuts down
overpowering fatigue? can largely only sleep, staying hydrated/fed becomes a problem. this sounds like a coma
THE SOLUTION
you could live your best life for however long it lasted, which is an option many took
others underwent a variety of experimental treatments, hoping any would help them or perhaps those who came after
protag and others chose to enter stasis until a cure could be found
but society as it was ended before a cure was ever found
those left in stasis either died there, or eventually woke up, becoming today's Travelers
TBD
TBD
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