Shattered Skies

I held them too tight   The cradle of my arms was too much   Beneath these shattered Skies   That I once held     I stood by, despite my efforts   Instead of my efforts healing a broken soul   They only led to a songless exaltation   Unknown I did not understand this toll     I stood in the stars   I raised you in the cosmos   In these constellations you grew under my watchful gaze   And the rivers that coursed through these heavens, ran dry     When my love caused you pain   When all my work was ash   When I sought your reconciliation   We sat beneath these shattered skies     Please, my dear Daughter   My Moon borne flower   You, the light made beneath broken glass   Needed not my help to grow     I see now that what they did   I see now that I wished for this to be better   I see now that my children have grown past the need for me   I wish to still be by your side, My dearest Illy

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Jan 31, 2025 05:24 by Jacqueline Yang

Reason, this is so sad! It sounds like a parent taking careful watch over their child, making sure that no harm will ever come to them. Only for that child to grow up and suddenly in the blink of an eye, they're not needed anymore.   And that just breaks my heart!

Jan 31, 2025 05:35

Well, you are not that far off the mark! The narrator in this poem has a unique perspective of things, ultimately a sad one. In a way, you're right, in an equally important way, not wrong enough. Vilorlith and Illy share, I hate to repeat myself, a unique relationship. A happy one, but the reason they came together is the source of this thought.

May you find the truth as it billows through the branches...