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She became a bard because her mum's horse doesn't like red hair

Bard-Chieftess Gaela Himmet (a.k.a. "Stringbird")

Mental characteristics

Personal history

She grew up in a Hami tribe that was in distant contact with the Branch People. Her mother was Hami, but her father was one of the Branch People. In an unusual twist for a story where a child has a step-parent, her ma was more of a problem for her growing up.

Her ma was a warrior and hunter of the tribe, and viewed her eldest daughter as a failure because she couldn't bond with Hamikos, the horse-like carnivorous creatures that Hami use in hunting and warfare.

Gaela taking up interest in a string instrument she found in a cabinet above her mum's bed, apparently a gift that Gaela's biological father had given her mother, also really pissed off her ma cos 1: snooping through her shit and 2: being interested in "branch people stuff" instead of being a proper Hami. Gaela's response of "you were certainly interested in that Branch Person's stuff" got her slapped across the face.

As a result of this and the failure on the part of anyone else in the tribe to step in, including her step-father, Gaela eventually left the village to join the branch people in the hopes of being accepted by them and maybe even meeting her biological father.

She was welcomed into the Branch People community, and learned to play the string instrument and what it was called from an old guy. It had a name in their language that wasn't guitar but it was basically a guitar.

Having developed curiosity about the world from the Branch People's stories of their old homelands and the homelands of their parents and grandparents, she decided to travel around the known world using ships with monster repellant seaweed, meeting all sorts of people and, as her talents grew, even being offered places as the personal musician in the courts of powerful people.

She was even allowed to perform in Lamara, a horrifically xenophobic nation that normally enslaves or kills foreigners, albeit with a bit of a "uh my Branch Person half is totally Lamaran lol".

Years later, she was on her way back to her village of birth because she'd gone through some development and wanted to make up with her mother. A lot of this was because that old guy who taught her who play told her that she's only got the one mum, and that unless her ma is so awful that it's legitimately not worth it she should make sure they're on good terms before one of them dies, as the afterlife is no place for grudges.

She was tricked by some slave traders into going aboard their ship, as they were going upriver to a town near her village. They held her captive, but she was able to break free.

She could've escaped from the boat right away, but instead went for her guitar first. As a result, she was stabbed before she could get off the ship.

She swum to shore and went under a tree for shelter from wind and rain, as well as to hide from the slave traders. She tried to treat herself, but it quickly became clear she'd bled too much.

Her last moments were spent singing and playing a song. The song wasn't written by her, unlike most other songs she played, as it was the old man who taught it to her. When translated, this song's lyrics roughly translate to a song that exists here on Earth.

Current Status
Dead.
Current Location
Ethnicity
Age
17
Children
Current Residence
A hollow under a tree, with the butterflies and bees.
Pronouns
She/her
Gender
Female
Eyes
Dark reddish-brown
Hair
Dark reddish-brown.
Skin Tone/Pigmentation
Light grey
Height
5'9
Weight
160 lbs
Belief/Deity
The Hami religion, but she also believes in the deities of other cultures/religions

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Jan 21, 2022 16:31

Pretty long title but it got me intrigued :p But could she really not bond because of her hair color or was it because it was not really her thing to be able to bond with them ?

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Jan 24, 2022 05:55 by Thicc Shrek

Hair colour. The Hami evolved a whole ass colour palate to trick the "is a baby of my species" part of the brains of the highly predatory carnivorous often sadistic horse thingies, and so Gaela's reddish hair not fitting into that palate means her appearance doesn't trick that part of their brains.

Too Short, Need Lore:

Hamikos are the horse thingies. Their name means "friend of the Hami". Look up what a thestral is. Now make it roided and muscular as ***. Remove the wings. Thicker neck. Bigger, almost crocodile-like mouth. And then a layer of wolf-like grey fur. Last, but not least, give them chimp-like intelligence and the sociopathic behaviours such as engaging in sadism and actively making the deaths of helpless prey more painful seemingly just for the fun of it. Also they're like twice as big as modern horses.

Hamiko fowls, the baby ones, also have light grey manes. These trigger a part of a Hamiko's brain basically going "is baby of own species, don't kill them even if they're annoying". Part of why this evolved, especially considering that good old gang violence over territory and kills between packs is pretty normal so you'd expect them to at least kill fowls from other packs, is probably the fact that Hamikos are both very prone to losing their own kids and kidnapping fowls from other packs to raise as their own to fill the void, like those penguins but without the part where penguins get bored of the adopted chicks and let them freeze to death. Basically "lol there's a good chance that's actually your kid, or the kid of one of your relatives, so no hurty dababy".

Hami are an ethnicity that evolved from another human ethnicity that went into the Black Forest (big mistake), or a mix of multiple ethnicities that did so... still a big mistake.

Hami evolved a whole colour palate to trick that part of their brains and get these things to stop hunting them.

That finally made it possible to start domesticating them, leading to Hamiko that Hami can bond with, as well as the fact that modern Hamiko aren't particularly sadistic and so will only hurt a normal human if that human touches them or the Hamiko is hungry.

The wild, sadistic variant can mostly only be found in the Deep Forest, parts of the Black Forest where no or few people live, as they were wiped out by Hami riding domesticated Hamikos in the more populated parts of the Black Forest.

Feb 2, 2022 10:31

Thanks for the explanation :) Now I understand why they don't like it :p

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Jan 24, 2022 04:47 by Jimmy Shrekson

Using Island Song like that got me ***ed up smh.Also was the old guy from our world, or is it that he learned it from someone else or something like that? Did she ever find her biological father?

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Put behind spoiler warnings cos it's mentioned in a different article lol.

Is this girl's skeleton the one that Sarah found that guitar attached to?

You've mentioned monster repellant seaweed and how it opened up the world in that article with that spiky ship that a big monster died trying to bang. How long has that seaweed been around?

Jan 24, 2022 05:16 by Thicc Shrek

For all but the last of those questions, my answers are the following: Cope, Seethe, Mald and Shiver, you'll never know.

For the last one, it's been around some unclear ambiguous amount of time, at least for Lamarans.

They basically copied it off of some seafaring peoples, because yeah no seafaring people could survive without it some of these sea monsters are on that Godzilla shit, so whenever some inbred big brainers on an island somewhere realized that the reason some country-sized sea crab hadn't eaten that island for extra minerals was because of the insanely toxic seaweed growing on it and that they could attach that seaweed to rafts to travel elsewhere, finding other islands with equally inbred dumbasses and spreading the seaweed/knowledge of how to use it to them to form the sea peoples. The Sea Peoples are probably the most genetically diverse group, both at large and individually, at least unless you count Lamara and it having slaves from all over the known world, because everyone's got tons of mixed ancestry of countless different ethnicities and even human sub-species that formed on these isolated islands before the monster-repellent seaweed was brought in. So for the Sea Peoples it's been at least hundreds, if not thousands, of years.

I'm not decided on how long ago the Lamarans should've gotten it. I'm currently thinking anywhere from 50 to 150 years ago, plus it taking 30 years in either case for it to become really widespread because that seaweed is a ***ing nightmare to cultivate.

Only grows in specific conditions, produces horrifically toxic liquids when in sea water (as well as a second, "smelly if you're a creature that smells things underwater" liquid that spreads faster in water, basically the "*** off ***" before the "okay I warned you time to die"), has to be grown in sea water - aka shitloads of poor people and slaves die cultivating the stuff because if that poison gets into the tiniest cut you're ***ed, and after all of that it has the gall to take 15 years to start producing more seeds.

Jan 30, 2022 23:10 by E. Christopher Clark

I love that her stepdad seemed like a good guy, though it makes me sad as a rutiluphile that the horsies don't like gingers. What's not to like?!   Seriously though, great work with this.

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Jan 31, 2022 02:23 by Thicc Shrek

Oh god. You're probably gonna hate what's been happening to gingers in Lamara then.

In the words of Lokra Spiky-Foot: "May every last one of the ginger bozos rest in piss, they shall not be missed."

Feb 11, 2022 03:31 by Angantyr

That's a nice backbone for a character's story and a neat title that befits a story and promises something funnily strange. Though it would read a tad easier if broken into smaller sections and maybe accompanied by visuals?   I'd love to read an extended version, should you pursue the idea further.

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Feb 13, 2022 23:23 by Thicc Shrek

I've been making videos that I plan to release the first few of, and will probably be the lowest quality of since I'm still new to making videos, one Twosday (22nd of Febuary, 2022). If I ever make a really bad video about her, I'll make sure to reply to this comment again with it so that you can cry at the fact that you even suggested it.

Feb 14, 2022 05:28 by Angantyr

^^   I'll be waiting, then.

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Feb 16, 2022 16:28 by Amélie I. S. Debruyne

Nice character. That's sad she didn't get to see her mother again :( also, did she ever met her father in the end?

Mar 26, 2022 00:39 by Thicc Shrek

He and some of his friends had already left, unaware of her existence, and stole a ship from some pirates. They died at sea due to a storm in which it rained so much that it was impossible to breathe, literally drowning on rainwater.

Three of the pirates they stole the ship from would be among the same slavers that tricked Gaela, and two of them - including the one that stabbed Gaela - would be present among the fleets of a certain self-proclaimed pirate king during the Baby War.

I'm currently leaning towards only one of these two still being alive, since the pirate king (alongside his most loyal supporters) was killed by a Lamaran "lesser Prince", the main character's boss's cousin, who then took over the pirate fleet and has been using and expanding it for slave-raiding for the past fourteen years. This would mean that one of them is among these pirates turned slave raiders.

3 of Gaela's younger half-siblings are among those he's enslaved, 2 others (along with Gaela's mother and stepfather) were killed and the oldest, who has a big case of survivor's guilt, is among the forces of Adun, a human anomaly (breaks rules of both science and magic. He's seemingly unkillable as long as he regularly eats human flesh, and the Hami think he's the incarnation of the vengeful spirits of all Hami who've died at the hands of outsiders) who's been gathering both an army and fleet to invade Lamara with for the past 3 years.

I am in no way prone to needlessly linking every little thing together.