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Oh I do love a bit of well written violence and the exploration of some darker themes.
A fair few of my articles get that treatment. Grizik appears to be one of the more popular dark reads that I've done so far!
Well, that escalated very quickly. XD I think the city sounds beautiful - I mean, at least until the terrifying violence occurred. I also love the portrayal of elves as indulging for the sake of indulging. That's a nice twist on them.
Indulgence is what elves do best!
Well written into and a lovely dark twist in the narrative. Now I'm curious about the Eclipse.
The event is sprinkled around my Summer Camp articles I think there's around 4 based on that point in time so far :)
I really liked the description of the town and the sudden turn near the end. I am a little curious how Thirival lost his eyes, though also understand that the POV in that section wouldn't know. Leaving it as a mystery does had more tension to the scene. Overall, I like it.
Thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) There are a couple other articles of mine that give very slightly more detail but it's something I'm working on.
Well, I was not expecting this to go where it did at all. That said, the presentation creates a great story hook for "The Eclipse" and what is happening. A place of beauty, indulgence, and debauchery suddenly turned on its head. I was hooked.
I'm glad you liked it! I've created a few stories around the event that affected some other races within the world. Check out https://www.worldanvil.com/w/havenguard-wreckerdwarf/a/the-frogfolk-of-the-eastern-swamps-species If you fancy reading a little more :p
The whiplash i had while reading this lol. Great Article nonetheless!
Whiplash was the intended response so I must be doing something right haha