Etrye
The Golden Finger of Ocrya
If ye are searchin' for a good time, look no further than good ol' Etrye! But don't forget to bring yer wallet! - Daerrom Bottlebane, famous dwarven merchantEtrye is Ocryas richest country. It deals in all sorts of luxurious goods such as wine, rare metals, gemstones, exotic creatures and plants. Large vineyards and sprawling cities span the northern part of the country, while the southern part is focused on seafaring and trading. Etryan wine is known all over the world, and travellers and merchants from all continents can be encountered in Etrye's massive capital city Qakkah.
Structure
Public Agenda
Etryans mostly are a friendly and welcoming people, but they still are rather cautious, especially when regarding new people. It's easy to make friends with an Etryan, but gaining their trust is a much harder task.
On the political side of things, the Sultan and the Council have both decided to stay as neutral as possible, only interfering in other countries' problems when it also directly affects Etrye.
Assets
The Etryan military, while a bit small, is also a force to be reckoned with - what it lacks in manpower, it more than makes up in firepower. Its most famous unit - the legendary Elephant Knights, who ride on Elephants that are equipped with massive cannons on their backs - are known and admired all over the world with many militaries trying to build up similar units, although mostly to no avail.
History
For about 600 years the early Etryans remained on Etryos, soon founding their first real city, Qrego, on the coast on the Island. In the year 1995 BF however, a different civilization from the mainland arrived in Etryos and convinced them to settle on the mainland under the guise of friendship, while in actuality they just wanted more unrestricted access to the resources on the island. Fooled by the newcomers friendly and seemingly honest demeanor, many Etryans took the journey to the mainland, leaving behind only a smidge of their populace.
Once they arrived on the mainland, they quickly started to settle, founding their first settlement - Qakkah - on the edge of the now destroyed land bridge that once connected Ocrya and Edria. Due to the friendly and open nature of the Etryans, Qakkah attracted many immigrants from Edria, quickly growing in size, reputation and power. Only about 80 years after its founding, Qakkah was the largest city on the Etryan peninsula, dwarfing the settlements of the people who tricked them into leaving Etryos. Soon, the Etryans started to expand and slowly started to settle further and further north, founding cities such as Qovale and Qarayah and starting their first wine businesses.
After the council of Medora disbanded in 57 AF, Etrye finally declared themselves as an actual country under the rule of the family that led their voyage onto the peninsula that they now called home. Qakkah soon became known as the main trading station of Ocrya after completion of a massive construction project expanding its harbour, and the Etryans quickly grew in power, wealth and population. Since then, not much has changed besides the modernization of many cities, with Etrye still thriving and growing everday.
Wealth of the Sea
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"Bottlebane" is an incredibly apt nickname for a dwarf :D It's a good article with a nice, tone-setting header image. Some thoughts after reading it:
You've got three "and"s in a row there. It'd probably rather smoother with just one, at the end. I'd consider splitting this sentence up a bit. Something like "Nowadays, the Sultan does not have many responsibilities. He retains the right to overrule any decision made by the Council." for example. Also not sure how that secures his continuation of the bloodline? Also decisions by "the people"? This place seems pleasant enough, but sounded more like an oligarchy than a democracy. :D What is it that makes them such a successful trading power? Is it their geographic location? Naval traditions? Tremendously skilled diplomats? Instead of "a very large", consider using a single, more punch words. Vast, expansive, great, for instance. :) How large is the country? I didn't get a good feel for its size. You don't need to give us an exact number of square miles, but are we talking large, small, etc? What is the climate like? You mention elephants, so it makes me think sort of Indian-ish perhaps, but there's not a lot of details about it. What's the geography like? Are there mountains, deserts, great rivers or lakes, or anything else that stands out for interest? That's what I can think of right now. It's a great start and I look forward to seeing how it turns out. :)Creator of Araea, Megacorpolis, and many others.
Oh dear, that is one long comment! Thanks a lot! :)
First of all, thank you for pointing out the little spelling "errors", i have no idea how i didn't notice them at first!
Regarding the government, it is a weird mixture of an oligarchy and a democracy. The council can freely decide to give a decision over to the public and because the sultan is still the highest member of the government, he could overrule the decisions of the council or public.
The reason Etrye is so succesful is a mixture of skilled diplomacy, the geographic location of the capital and the abundance of assets they own. They were also one of the first people to trade intercontinentially, so that certainly helped with building up their reputation and skill.
While it is the second smallest country on the continent, it would still be quite large for our standards, mainly because there only are 6 countries in Ocrya. The climate in the northern parts is similar to Italy, while the southernmost parts of the peninsula have an Indian-ish climate.
As for the geography, the northern part of Etrye is quite hilly with some larger forests and there even is a small mountain range near the border to Medora, while the southern part becomes more and more flat and vegetation becomes more tropical and a bit more scarce. There also are a few rivers and lakes, mostly in the nothern part of the country.
Once again, thank you so much for your detailed comment, and also thank you for getting my worldbuilding gears turning on full power!
It's hard to notice the small errors, because we know what it's supposed to look like in our heads. :) These are all excellent answers to the questions. Add them to the article, really helps flesh it out :D Glad I could help! Have fun writing!
Creator of Araea, Megacorpolis, and many others.