Unbroken

Arishta waited until she heard a quiet snore and another peaceful breath. Next to her, an older man lay on his stomach, his arm draped over her breasts. On the other side of the bed lay a second naked woman. Both had finally fallen asleep after the exertions. It smelled of sweat and the stale sweet scent of patchouli and tasteless wine that had spread throughout the room last night. It disgusted her.   Carefully, Arishta released herself from the embrace and glided out from under the silken bed sheet. The night was almost over, but a few candles were still burning in the room. The light caressed her body. Her bare back was marked by welts, which she hid under her long brown hair. She slipped into a red, slightly transparent dress that was lying on the floor and tried, as many times before, to tiptoe quietly to the door. She did not want to wake the man and the other playmate. But this time she paused.   She turned and spotted a small dagger on the table next to the bed. The red rubies and yellow diamonds on the hilt and scabbard sparkled in the candlelight, begging her to end it once and for all. She carefully climbed onto the bed and sat on the man's back. Both slept soundly. The wine shows its full effect. In the candlelight, Arishta looked at the man's face, which had flickered into a drooling grimace. The man had become careless and had probably assumed that he had broken Arishta. She pulled the dagger from the scabbard and without hesitation, Arishta grabbed the man's damp, sweaty curls and stabbed into the soft flesh of his neck. Then she guided the unconscious playmate's hand to the hilt of the dagger and pulled it out of the artery.   Arishta was only 17 years old, but the last two years had been hell. She watched as her tormentor's blood shot out of his veins and tainted the bed and the woman - just as the man had tainted her for the last two years. It was a pity for the playmate, but Arishta and the people needed a scapegoat. Then she knocked over a candle and the curtain on the bed burst into flames. He, the God-King of Fire, was to pay for his sins and for everything he had done to her and be consumed by the flames of his element. She saw the flames spread to the bed and quietly left the room to flee into the safety of the fading night.   She had done it for her parents, who had died two years ago for unknown reasons. She had done it for her three younger siblings, for whom she was responsible. She had done it for her country, which he had driven to ruin. She had done it for herself, to finally be free. That was exactly what she kept reminding herself of from that day on, so that she wouldn't perish from her first murder.

 

In response to Lady Wynter's unofficial challenge




Cover image: Characters of Idaka by Blue Fairy 74 - Midjourney-Collage

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Feb 9, 2025 11:56

Oh, this was great. A regicide that I did not see coming. Simply love the story you have woven here - equal parts courage and desperation. Although I'm a bit concerned about "the first" murder - how many more are there in her future


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Feb 9, 2025 12:48

Oh, thank you so much, it really means a lot to hear that from you. Maybe those two years have ruined and numbed her forever.

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Feb 9, 2025 13:55

This few words really want me to learn more about her. Wonderful writing, interesting story. I hope her story will continue one day.

Feb 9, 2025 14:06

Thank you so much, just don't pressure me for the character article. It's going to be really hard.

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Feb 9, 2025 17:54 by Absinthe

I am reminded of the woman that brought a pistol into the courtroom and shot the man dead that had murdered her daughter. I probably read too much crime.

Feb 15, 2025 08:59

Unfortunately, criminals today are not always given the punishment they deserve, so the mother's reaction is completely understandable. But here it is possible.

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Feb 9, 2025 21:05 by Imagica

This is an amazing way to introduce a character. It is very well written (as always) and incredibly intriguing—I want to learn more about her and all the different motivations that led her to murder. I could understand the act even if it had been done solely to earn her freedom, but you have woven in many more reasons, making the story even more compelling. Very well done! Bravo! <3

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Feb 15, 2025 09:02

Thank you so much, that really means a lot to me. But now I'm really worried that this part promises too much and the character isn't really convincing.

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Feb 13, 2025 16:14

Der König ist tot! Lang lebe der König!
Sehr guter Aufhänger für Arishta. Die Frage ist nun, wie wird sich das auf ihre Psyche auswirken? Abgesehen von den dramatischen Jahren als des Königs Zwangsgespielin ist ein Mord aus Rache immer noch ein Mord, vor allem, wenn man bedenkt, dass sie auch die zweite Gespielin eiskalt den Flammen überlassen hat. Ein normales Leben wird die Gute wohl nicht mehr führen können.

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Feb 15, 2025 09:15

Ähm ja, ihr Leben wird danach nicht mehr dasselbse sein. Eigentlich sollte sie der ultimative Bösewicht werden, der über "Leichen" geht und in der Geschichte wollte ich ihr Trauma auch nicht ausbreiten, doch nachdem ich jetzt auch an ihrem Artikel arbeite, bin ich mir nicht mehr sicher, wo ihre Entwicklung wirklich hinführt.

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Feb 17, 2025 07:38

Ein Trauma dieser Art ist natürlich eine gute Erklärung, warum jemand zum Bösewicht wird. Ich bin auf jeden Fall sehr gespannt, wo es hinführt!

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Feb 22, 2025 15:07 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

Very curious as to why this is her 'first' murder. Poor girl. Sounds like she has had a bit of a rough start. :( I feel a little sorry for the other woman.

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Mar 1, 2025 08:18

Well, if you include the woman in the thought process, the woman was also murdered, so we already have two. Those two years with her uncle have left their mark on Arishta, and not just physically. Thank you for reading.

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