BUILD YOUR OWN WORLD Like what you see? Become the Master of your own Universe!

Patrick Johnathon Feely

Description

Pat still has the frame of a former athlete—broad shoulders, strong arms—but there’s tension in how he holds himself now. His jaw’s always tight, his eyes a little too watchful. He works in a warehouse off 47th, shows up early, keeps his head down. He dresses clean but plain, favoring white undershirts and flannel overshirts, like he's always ready to move a pallet or fix a car. He lives by routine, and Mary is the center of it.  

Personality

Pat is proud, disciplined, and increasingly insecure. He peaked early, and part of him knows it—even if he’d never say it out loud. He wants to be the man people respect, but his fear of being replaced or forgotten simmers just below the surface. When jealous or threatened, he doesn’t lash out immediately—he broods, tightens the grip, and eventually breaks.  

Habits

  Does pushups every morning before work—never skips   Drinks exactly two beers every Friday night after payday   Keeps a photo of his 1949 championship team in his wallet   Drives past Mary’s church sometimes when he knows she’s there, just to “check in”  

Hooks & Angles

  Jealous Flame: He’s convinced Sean’s sniffing around Mary, and he’s not the type to forgive it.   Old Wounds: He once got scouted for minor league ball—but something happened. A name from that past could set him off.   Turf Trouble: His boss is involved with local muscle (Insane Cornel Boys or CPD), and Pat might get dragged in.   Final Straw: One more crack in his world, and Pat could explode—emotionally, violently, or both.
Year of Birth
1930 CE 23 Years old
Birthplace
Chicago, IL (Back of the Yards)
Children
Eyes
Hard blue, always squinting like he’s sizing you up
Hair
Dirty blond, short, receding at the temples
Skin Tone/Pigmentation
Sun-tanned arms, calloused hands, a faint broken nose
Height
6'0"
Weight
198 lbs.
Belief/Deity
Protestant, but hasn’t been to church in years

Comments

Please Login in order to comment!