New Avalon The Dawn of the Industrial Revolution... with Magic!

This world takes the High Fantasy of traditional fantasy like Dungeons and Dragons and brings it to the dawn of the industrial revolution!   I will need to take some time to create various settings, like Deities, Geography, Technology, Magic, Societal Structures, etc.   NOTE: IF THINGS LOOK IN ANY WAY QUESTIONABLE, PLEASE SPEAK TO ME FIRST BEFORE DECIDING TO JUMP TO CONCLUSIONS. I AM VERY RECEPTIVE TO FEEDBACK, AND I WANT TO KNOW IF THINGS SOUND OFF TO YOU SO I CAN SEE ABOUT CHANGING THINGS. THIS IS WHY I HAVE THIS REPOSITORY.   Much of this is raw, unfiltered, unedited thoughts and may need *heavy* refinement. I genuinely want your feedback, but not in a setting where I have to take time away from writing my story to defend myself from misunderstandings.