Why did you start? Motivation?
I started with Dungeons and Dragons, at first being a fan then diving head-fast into the material and playing with a very close friend. I decided to create a world where dragons didn't feel like paper monsters and magic wasn't all hand-waving. I desire depth and wish to immerse my players and myself into this world.
Focus
The world is filled with wonder and danger being one in the same.
- Magic is integrated and has effects,
- Gods & Dragons walk amoung morals,
- Produce an immersive world with flexibility.
Scope
Currently only 3 continents exist in Excellence; two continents have "newly" established civilization and territories, while the third is untamed wild. The continents are dragons' territory, mortals merely claim land, but the gods own it all if they so desired. Dragons & gods walk these lands beside the mortals. The gods are to be worshiped, respected, and never stand against them, for their wrath is swift. Magic is in every living being, though one must speak with the dragons and gods if you desire more than what lies inside.
Genre
Hard & High Fantasy and
Mature & Surreal.
Magic is integrated into the world from the individual, to cities, and all across the realms. Even though an individual can channel magic, it is very limited and requires 'teaching' to gain more spells. Gods, Fey, Dragons, and other beings can give an individual the ability to cast world-changing magic. Most individuals learn from the Dragons and Gods, as both are readily accessible, however can you stand the teaching? Are you willing to sacrifice yourself to grasp this power?
Mature content will be added to this world later as time goes on. The game-play of this world is gory and graphic. The world and its character do not hold back, however, this does not mean the game master will push, or cross the boundaries, set between the player and GM. The tag mature is considered 18+ on WorldAnvil; thus the author considers graphic torture, death scenes, drug use, and triggering topics as such. Surrealism will come into play when content about the other realms is added.
Tech Level
Most of technology is based around magic, though physical mechanisms do exist and are used. The flexibility of magic has allowed for mechanisms to exist outside of their era. Technologies are limited by magic, caster, and the individual's imagination thus you can find many different types of technology that normally wouldn't exist at the same time without it.
Example: Elevators made out of magic instead of mechanical parts
I like how you utilized the formatting options that are at your disposal as a free user, mainly the aloud boxes and the columns. Your English is a little bit wonky sometimes, but that's not too big of an issue. If you want, I could take the time to go over your article and give you a more detailed list of what I mean by that.
Mature Fantasy is probably my very most favorite genre-combination, so I'm looking forward to what you make of this, and seeing you in the Discord over the course of WASC. ^^
Please, do expand. I haven't make any content containing mature elements yet, however, the setting has included mature elements in gameplay.......such I go back and tag the Still Womb article as mature??
I see some improvements. You're learning. That's good. ^^