Toniti - a Rainbow Sprite Species in Colossus | World Anvil

Toniti - a Rainbow Sprite

Whenever a rainbow occurs in Colossus there is a small chance that it will manifest a Toniti. A fey like creature usually adorned in a tartan kilt in shades of pink.   A Toniti will spend hours hyper focusing on the moments below, seeking out the perfect one to interrupt and spice up with their magical mischief. To some a blessing to others a nightmare.   Living for the games folks create, making their way through the layers of life's imagination. A Toniti can be found where skittles are knocked over by a breeze where there is no wind, or flipping the winning card at a tavern table.   But most of all it is the dice, the element of chance that they can manipulate. Sometimes for the joy on ones face and other times the tears of a meanie.   Those that have travelled the many lands of the world through mountain pass, enchanted forest, and event the odd snowy tundra have stories of the Toniti, all tell it differently.   Some say they saw a goblin, others a glaive wielding pixie, the latest tale that of a tiny gecko wreathed in mist and shadow. As varied as the rainbow these tales would be, the only consistency, the colour pink.   When the Rainbow no longer holds a spot in the sky, just as its fading, that's the moment to be the most mischievous you can be. If the magic is true the Rainbow will give you a glimpse of the next form the Toniti will take.   If you are super lucky and have provided many opportunities of mischief then a Toniti will take the image of your spirit and capture it, arcanely applying it to canvas. A gift for when you wake. A signature lock of vibrant pink hair left beside it.

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Aug 18, 2023 02:45 by Chaewon Choi

I love it! This has such a whimsical feeling to the description. I love the style of talking about it like a story rather than describing it like some nature textbook.   Single feedback, this one sentence stood out to me, "A fey like creature usually adorned in a tartan kilt of pinks and darker pinks". The only feedback I have is changing the wording of "pinks and darker pinks". Maybe something like, "a tartan kilt in shades of pink" or "a tartan kilt of light and dark pinks" or even "a tartan kilt of many pinks". I don't exactly know what you could do with it, just do whatever you think is best.   Enjoyed your idea, hope you continue worldbuilding, I hope to come across some of your other ideas!!

Thank You, Choi Chaewon.
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Mar 21, 2024 09:59

Hi Choi, I have only just seen this, still a noob to WA, thank you for your comments :)   I went with your "a tartan kilt in shades of pink"

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Mar 30, 2024 20:50 by Chaewon Choi

Oh my goodness, you're the sweetest! Thank you so much for taking my feedback to heart - it means a lot to me. I'm thrilled to hear that you're enjoying your time with WorldAnvil and Worldbuilding, and I can't wait to see what you create!

Thank You, Choi Chaewon.
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Mar 31, 2024 10:47

Thank you :) it was good feedback

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