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Sat 24th May 2025 03:17

Entry 70: Whitewail

by Hayley Thomas

Dear diary,
 
Describing Whitewail in all its frozen majesty feels almost impossible. The city clings to the side of a towering, snow-draped mountain like a crown carved from ice and stone. Its architecture is flawless and unsettling—tall towers of white marble rising like frozen spires, their edges sharp as blades, spiraling walls hugging the rugged slopes. It’s beautiful, yes, but in the way a glacier is beautiful: cold, silent, and dangerous.
 
We stood for a long time, just staring.
 
My illusion spell had unraveled sometime during the flight, leaving us exposed beneath the twilight sky. I could cast it again—but not until dawn. And we weren’t about to risk a direct approach with that many eyes above and within those walls.
So we chose patience, setting up camp in the shadow of a jagged outcrop. Better to wait and gather our strength than charge in half-prepared.
 
As we rested, Liliana told us more about Whitewail—details only someone who’d served Vivienne would know. Beneath the mountain, she said, tunnels wove like veins through stone, connecting districts, barracks, and halls. One enormous tunnel ran the length of the mountain itself, all the way to the harbor on the far side. A lifeline for ships and supplies. A natural choke point.
 
But then she shared something else. Something that made the entire harbor plan feel small and foolish.
 
“There’s a portal,” she said quietly, as if afraid Vivienne might still hear her from miles away. “In the heart of the fortress. One that leads straight to Nimmerhold.”
 
That stopped us cold.
 
“Unattended?” I asked.
 
“Most of the time. It’s how Vivienne travels quickly when she needs to. She never expects enemies to make it that far.”
 
I didn’t ask why she hadn’t told us sooner. Maybe she’d wanted to wait until we were far enough away from Vivienne’s gaze. Maybe she hadn’t fully trusted us yet. Either way, it didn’t matter. This changed everything.
 
There were two routes to the portal: one direct, heavily guarded by Vivienne’s forces. The other—a back entrance through the icy tunnels—was longer, riskier, but with fewer guards. Liliana warned us of frost creatures in the deeper caverns, things ancient and forgotten by most surface-dwellers. But we’d faced worse.
 
We looked at one another and came to the same decision without a word.
 
The harbor could wait. The portal was our way home.
 
And this time, we wouldn’t be running. We’d be cutting through the mountain’s heart—straight into the jaws of Vivienne’s domain.
 
And then Gael—bless his ever-questionable instincts—made a suggestion that made me seriously wonder if he’s secretly trying to sabotage us. Has he turned coat to King Ulther and just forgot to mention it? Because his bright idea was this: “Why don’t we ask Vivienne for a place to sleep tonight?”
 
Right. Sure. Let’s just waltz up to Whitewail’s front gates and politely inform the Queen of Ice and Secrets that her fugitives would like room service and a pillow mint. Maybe she’d even tuck us in and assign a dozen guards to watch us sleep. Just in case we get cold.
 
I wasn’t the only one appalled. Thankfully, everyone else shared the same expression of “absolutely not” and gave Gael the blank, stunned look he so often earns. Honestly, it ranked just below his brilliant suggestion to bring Dynia with us. But only just.
 
So, we made camp for the night instead, tucking ourselves away beneath the cloak of snow and fading light. Luke conjured one of his magical shelters—warm, soundproof, and hidden—and Gael redeemed himself slightly by laying false tracks to throw off any unwanted attention. Good thing too, because a patrol of winter wolves passed uncomfortably close. Their icy growls cut through the dark, but they didn’t find us. Between illusion and misdirection, we stayed ghosts in the frost.
 
Sixth “night” in Neverhold.
 
Morning—or whatever passes for morning in this land of dusk—brought new preparations. I cast the illusion again, draping each of us and our mounts in a glamour that made us look like we belonged here. Eyeshadow of frost, cloaks of shifting snow, the works. Feywild fashion, but subtle. I also reminded everyone, gently, to please not kill any guards if it could be avoided. A courtesy to Vivienne, who had, for all her secrets, helped us more than once.
 
They agreed. Mostly. Though I could see that glint in Luke’s eye—the one that says “I won’t start a fire unless someone else really deserves it.” I know that look well. He’s my brother, after all.
 
Getting through the gates was easy. Too easy, maybe. The guards barely gave us a second glance, more concerned with keeping warm than examining travelers. Cloaked in illusion, we slipped into Whitewail like snowflakes on a breeze.
 
Liliana took the lead, guiding us through the winding alleys and tunnel mouths that coiled around the mountain’s base. It wasn’t long before we reached the outskirts of the cave—our path to the back entrance and, beyond it, the portal to Nimmerhold.
 
But nothing’s ever simple. A watchtower loomed at the entrance, squat and bristling with blades and frost-enchanted stones. We weren’t going through unnoticed. Not without a plan.
 
So we sent Dadroz to scout. He returned with his usual grin and unshakable confidence, claiming we could sneak past easily. I admire his optimism. I truly do. But aside from Dadroz and Gael, we’re about as subtle as a thunderstorm in a mirror maze.
 
Luke, ever the subtle tactician, suggested we burn the whole place to the ground to get past the guards. Charming, really. I countered with something a little less... apocalyptic. A dense fog, conjured thick and heavy to blanket the ground, masking our approach like an early morning mist. If we timed it right, it would seem completely natural—nothing to alert the sentries perched in their towers of ice and stone.
 
And so, hand in hand, we crept forward through the snow as the fog rolled in, our steps muffled by magic and frost. It was slow going—visibility reduced to just the people beside you—but before long we reached the yawning mouth of the cave, the first real step toward the portal.
 
Of course, nothing in Whitewail comes unguarded. At the entrance loomed a pair of yeti and several winter wolves, fur crusted with ice and eyes alert with suspicion. Liliana didn’t hesitate. She stepped forward like she belonged there, voice calm and commanding.
 
“We were sent by Lady Vivienne,” she said, cool as the snow underfoot. “We've returned from a special assignment and need to report in.”
 
The yeti eyed us warily. Massive, hulking things—hard to read, and harder to convince. But then Liliana drew the sword Vivienne had gifted her, and let the moonlight catch on its blade. That did the trick. The yeti grunted and stepped aside, and just like that, we were in.
 
I’m not sure what impressed me more—the way she lied, or the way she sold it like truth. Liliana has a gift, no doubt. She fights with steel, but her tongue might be sharper still. I just hope she knows how powerful she is.
 
We pressed deeper into the tunnels, the air growing colder and heavier with each step. And then we found them—two towering ice golems stationed at the back entrance, eyes glowing with an unnatural frostlight. These ones weren’t going to be talked down.
 
The battle was quick and brutal. Blades met frost, spells cracked the ice, and within minutes the golems were nothing more than shattered shards across the stone floor. If Vivienne had planted them here to stop us, she hadn't been trying very hard. A warning, maybe. Or a test.
 
But she’d layered her protection in more than muscle. As Dadroz knelt to unlock the gate—ever the bold locksmith—there was a sudden grinding crack above us. Then a rumble. Stones fell, crashing down onto Liliana, Alistan, and Dadroz before we could react. Dust choked the air, and for one breathless second, my heart stopped.
 
Fortunately, they all came out of it with bruises and scrapes, but nothing worse. Vivienne’s traps weren’t meant to kill—just to slow us down.
 
Behind the now-unlocked gate stretched a narrow hallway, dim and cold, leading to a heavy door at the far end. No traps sprang as we stepped through, but that only made us more cautious. Dadroz, still brushing dust from the last cave-in off his cloak, approached the door with more care than usual. His fingers danced over the edges—click—another trap, this one caught just in time. He disabled it with a quiet mutter and a grin over his shoulder.
 
We crossed the hallway slowly, watching every shadow. Nothing moved. No golems. No wolves. No sudden walls of ice.
 
But the moment Dadroz cracked open the final door, we understood why.
 
Vivienne stood waiting.
 
Framed by the pale glow of the portal behind her, her white hair stirred gently in the chill wind she summoned with a casual flick of her hand. Her expression was infuriating—calm, poised, pleased. As if we were right on schedule.
 
“I must admit,” she said, smiling faintly, “I wasn’t sure you’d take the long route. But here you are.”
 
And then the wind came.
 
A blast of frigid air howled down the hallway, knocking us backward. Frost formed in cracks on the walls. The floor turned slick and treacherous. She wasn’t just blocking the path—she was daring us to take it anyway.
 
I made a choice.
 
If she wanted to test us, fine. But she wasn’t going to make it hard.
 
With a whisper and a twist of my fingers, I bent the space around her, teleporting her cleanly to the other side of the hall. It wasn’t a violent spell—just efficient. I saw the flicker of recognition in her eyes, and—crucially—no resistance. She let it happen.
 
She was never going to stop us. Not really.
 
One by one, the others rushed past her and into the portal. Luke hesitated, his fingers twitching with unspent fire. His eyes locked with Vivienne’s, disappointment clear. He had so wanted to roast something. But even he knew better than to pick a real fight with her. Not today.
 
Maybe next time, brother.
 
Liliana hadn’t moved yet. She stood by the portal, blade in hand, eyes fixed on Vivienne like she was waiting for some unspoken word, some final moment. Maybe a goodbye. Maybe closure.
 
But I wasn’t about to risk her staying behind for sentiment.
 
So I ran.
 
As I passed, I caught her hand—tight, sure—and pulled her with me. She staggered just a step, then matched my pace. Behind us, she gave a small wave to Vivienne, a flick of fingers full of irony or affection or both.
 
And then we stepped through the portal, together.
 
I don’t know what Liliana had hoped to say to her former mistress. But I know this: I wasn’t leaving her. Not for anything.

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  1. Entry one: The trials
  2. Entry two: The bramble
  3. Entry 3: Rosebloom
  4. Entry 4: Hearts and Dreams
  5. Entry 5: of ghosts and wolves
  6. Entry 6: Hillfield and Deals with Fae
  7. Entry 7: mysteries and pastries
  8. Entry 8: The scarecrow ruse
    6th of Lug, 121 Year of the Tree
  9. Entry 9: A betrayal of satyrs
    7th of Lug, 121 year of the Tree
  10. Entry 10: The fate of twins
    8th of Lug, 121 year of the Tree
  11. Entry 11: Cursed twins
    10th of Lug, 121 year of the Tree
  12. Entry 12: Loss and despair
    11th of Lug, 121 year of the Tree
  13. Hayley's rules to being a Witch
  14. Entry 13: the price of safety
    12th of Lug, 121 year of the Tree
  15. Entry 14: A golden cage and fiery tower
    13th of Lug, 121 year of the Tree
  16. Entry 15: A trial by fire
    14th of Lug, 121 year of the Tree
  17. Entry 16: Keralon
    15th of Lug, 121 year of the Tree
  18. Letter to Luke 1
  19. Letter to Luke 2
  20. Letter to Luke 3
  21. Letter to Luke 4
  22. Letter to Luke 5
  23. Letter to Luke 6
  24. Entry 17: I shall wear midnight
    1st of Nuan, 126 Era of the Tree
  25. Entry 18: peace in our time
    2nd of Nuan, 126 Era of the Tree
  26. Entry 19: Caern Fussil falls
    3rd of Nuan, 126 Era of the Tree
  27. Entry 20: I see fire
    4th of Nuan, 126 Era of the Tree
  28. Entry 21: Cultists twarted
    10th of Nuan, 126 Era of the Tree
  29. Entry 22: Ravensfield
    14th of Nuan, 126 Era of the Tree
  30. Entry 23: The Hollow Hill Horror
    15th of Nuan, 126 Era of the Tree
  31. Entry 24: Burn your village
    16th of Nuan, 126 Era of the Tree
  32. Entry 25: Ravensfield burns
    17th of Nuan, 126 Era of the Tree
  33. Entry 26: There will be blood!
    21st of Nuan, 126 Era of the Tree
  34. Entry 27: A happy reunion
    22nd of Nuan, 126 Era of the Tree
  35. Entry 28: The embassy ball
    23rd of Nuan, 126 Era of the Tree
  36. Entry 29: The fate of Robert Talespinner
    24th of Nuan, 126 Era of the Tree
  37. Entry 30: A royal summons
    28th of Nuan, 126 Era of the Tree
  38. Entry 31: of Dogville and Geese
    29th of Nuan, 126 Era of the Tree
  39. Entry 32: A boggle named Pim
    30th of Nuan, 126 Era of the Tree
  40. Entry 33: A deal broken
    1st of Aran, 126 Era of the Tree
  41. Entry 34: The cost of doing what is right
    2nd of Aran, 126 Era of the Tree
  42. Entry 35: A dish best served cold
    9th of Aran, 126 Era of the Tree
  43. entry 36: Cornu returns?
    10th of Aran, 126 Era of the Tree
  44. Entry 37: A letter from Amarra
    11th of Aran, 126 Era of the Tree
  45. Entry 38: The case of the (not) missing villagers
    14th of Aran, 126 Era of the Tree
  46. Entry 39: A curse broken
    15th of Aran, 126 Era of the Tree
  47. Entry 40: Into the Lorewood
    18th of Aran, 126 Era of the Tree
  48. Entry 41: Cabin in the Woods
    19th of Aran, 126 Era of the Tree
  49. Entry 42: Myrdin and Anaya
    20th of Aran, 126 Era of the Tree
  50. Entry 43: Into the Immerglade
    21st of Aran, 127 Era of the Tree
  51. Entry 44: A tale as old as time
    22nd of Aran, 127 Era of the Tree
  52. Entry 45: The truth
    23rd of Aran, 128 Era of the Tree
  53. Entry 46: Luke's Ordeal
    24th of Aran, 128 Era of the Tree
  54. Entry 47: The festival
    26th of Aran, 128 Era of the Tree
  55. Entry 48: Trouble at the Cathedral
    2nd of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  56. Entry 49: Quinn's court
    4th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  57. Entry 50: onwards to Latebra Velora
    5th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  58. Entry 51: Where is my cow?
    6th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  59. Entry 52: Here be dragons
    7th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  60. Entry 53: Dragon hoard with a side of scarabs
    8th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  61. Entry 54: Leave the basilisks alone
    9th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  62. Entry 55: Return to Ravensfield
    10th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  63. Entry 56: The needs of the many...
    11th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  64. Entry 57: Dreams of Sister Willow
    12th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  65. Entry 58: wetlands be wet
    13th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  66. Entry 59: Baron Perenolde
    14th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  67. Entry 60: Talebra Velora and the lady Morenthene
    15th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  68. Entry 61: Cypria
    16th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  69. Entry 62: Dragon takes Knight
    17th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  70. Entry 63: Return to Talebra Velora
    18th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  71. Entry 64: Your presence is “requested”
    19th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  72. Entry 65: I stand alone
    20th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  73. Entry 66: A day of normalcy
    21th of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  74. Entry 67: Into the Neverhold
    22nd of Brigan, 128 Era of the Tree
  75. Entry 68: The Warg King
  76. Entry 69: Chased by birds
  77. Entry 70: Whitewail