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Raltor The Fire Salamander

Raltor a dwarf is known as a great leader that lead them to victory against the creatures of dark in the war of Allom. Before him becoming a great leader respected by many he was just a humble mason. A mason that built many houses for may people in his community so he got the opportunity to make many great friends with the people he worked for. Raltor didn't just work to build houses but he did many little tasks that people needed help with. he wasn't the strongest dwarf but he was respected in his community.   one incident there was a cave in in a tunnel were some kids were playing and the loud sound of rock falling could be heard through out the cavern. Raltor was one of the first to act running to the tunnel with tools he was going great until the tunnel caved in more trapping him in there as well but with a bit of determination he tunneled out with the kids and found a injured salamander and rescued it on the way out. realtor nursed the salamander back to health and became his loyal companion. the salamander was a fire salamander small but has a great rage and would breath fire.   Raltor was taller than most dwarves and stood out in a crowd he was strong and had red hair and great fierce beard that made him look a lot more intimidating then he actually is. Raltor was drafted into the army under the charge of Thunus Bloodguard he lead them against the creatures of the dark but he did a terrible job and his first battle with the creatures he lost half his army then Raltor took charge and lead them to victory in the War of Allom. he then received a title of the Fire Salamander a new title and went back home and lived a peaceful life.
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Aug 13, 2022 11:20 by LexiCon (WordiGirl)

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Aug 25, 2022 12:35 by LexiCon (WordiGirl)

Interesting article, though it does seem quite rushed and could use a bit more punctuation editing (and maybe hiding or filling up the sidebar) but, other than that, great story that proved quite intriguing. I know Summer Camp was hectic for many, and "word sprints up to 300 then stop and move on" was something I was guilty of doing a lot as well. Still, just figured I'd mention. Thanks and God bless! <3