This is probably going to upset some of you, but I have actually decided to not post here to this manuscript anymore on World Anvil. I've been posting this story to Archive of Our Own (AO3) simultaneously, but I just did a BUNCH of edits to this story and copied them over there. I don't want to have to go through that whole process again here.
I highly recommend re-reading from Chapter 8 forward on AO3, where I have made the changes. I've added Ollivanders and corrected some of the cultural elements from the previous version.
I do still plan to keep using the world that I've built here on World Anvil because it's super useful to have that for cross-referencing and planning, but I just can't keep up with two manuscripts. (Hell, I'm 6 weeks behind on videos).
I hope you'll check it out there and continue reading. I'm sorry for the inconvenience.