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Great article! I love how you've presented it as if we're receiving the package. The details of where the silk comes from are interesting. I like how you've included lots of worldbuilding/cultural Japanese elements and use tooltip to give a brief explanation. A few mistakes I noticed while reading or comments I had: " on the front and back shoulders and middle of the back." Does that means that the symbol is present three times? Front shoulder, back shoulder, and middle of the back? Having it twice on the back seems a bit strange. I think you have a typo at sandals which is written "sandles". " On one's head, you wear a tate eboshi hat, starched that stands straight up." It feels strange to use "one" in the first half of the senetence and "you" in the second half, especially when the whole article use "you". "You may tuck weapons may into your obi or carry them with you." You have "may" repeated twice here. I just have one comment: I think you could put the box explaining what the uniform is in the full footer to avoid having the empty sidebar on the side.
Oh and I forgot to say, I like how the letter switch to English when clicking on it!
Thank you so much for the input! (I can tell my 11pm editing skills need work! Lol)