How I Write Motivated Characters
Motives
What do they want?
I find it easiest to start with the old standby for writing characters: "What does this person want?"Main Characters
This answer to this question for your primary characters can be as simple or as complicated as you want to write it, as this is only a starting point, the outwardly presenting aspect of motivation. I have found I generally prefer to make the goals personal if I can, as even a small goal can have large impact on the world, although sometimes the wide brush strokes of large scale dreams still work better for a particular character. To give a few basic examples:- To save her country.
- To amass personal power.
- To heal her mother.
- To protect his family.
- To guide their best friend to redemption.
- To survive.
Supporting Characters
As a note, for supporting characters you can certainly answer the same questions as for main characters, but sometimes you are only starting with a need to fulfill a task in your story rather than a full fledged idea of a character. In these instances you can replace their motivation with your main character's relationship to them or your motivation for adding them to your story, and then build that side character's motivations from there. Many side characters start as thoughts such as:- My main character hates him.
- This character will give my main character the information they need.
- This person pretends to be an ally but will backstab the main character later.
- This is the person who tends the bar at the tavern.
- This person falls in love with my main character's sidekick.
Have more than you show
Speak less than you know.
Why Do They Want It?
Lean Engineering has a basic concept of problem solving, called the "5 Whys" or "7 Whys" depending upon your source material. The theory is that by asking questions you can identify the maximum-impact solution to any problem. (This is also the method used by toddlers everywhere to locate the maximum-frustration point of their parents). You take what you know about the problem you are solving and ask "Why?" Then take that answer and ask your questions again. Ask enough times and you reach the root of the issue, the item that actually needs to be solved. Asking why brings you to the heart of the matter. Well written characters have hearts too, and this method can help you unlock the secrets they carry that dictate their choices.Main Characters
For main characters the process is once again fairly straightforward. Keep asking why until you feel you have the answer you needed. Let's take a dive into a small example, and ask why she feels compelled to do what she does: Motivation: To end the war.Why?
- Because she doesn't want her son to grow up having to worry about endless wars where nobody is right.
- Because she has seen first hand the effects of war.
- Because she lost her own parents to the war, and her son lost his father.
Why?
- Because she doesn't want her son to grow up having to worry about endless wars where nobody is right.
- Because she feels responsible for the death of her son's father.
- Because she was responsible.
- Because she led the attack that killed him.
- Because she was so consumed by thoughts of revenge for the death of her own parents that she didn't think about who else she might hurt.
Side Characters
Side characters don't always begin with a motive of their own, but rather our own motives for why we are including them. These motives can also be broken down into useful character motivations by asking why. For example, taking one of the side character examples from above... Motive for Adding Them: My main character hates them.Why?
- Because MC is angry at this side character for encouraging his worst inclinations.
- Because encouraging MC's destructive tendencies was beneficial to the side character.
- Because MC's violent actions reflected favorably upon the side character, earning them even more power.
- Because the MC was their apprentice or underling.
- Because the side character had something useful to offer MC in return for his subservience.
Why?
- Because she wants them to succeed in defeating the evil wizard.
- Because the evil wizard killed her cousin.
Why?
- Because she wants them to succeed in defeating the evil wizard.
- Because she wants her cousin to take the evil wizard's place.
What Won't They Do? Why?
Often times we think about just how far a character will go to reach their goals, but I've discovered I learn more when asking about their limits:- What lines won't they cross, under any circumstances? Why not?
- Which limits are flexible under specific circumstances? Why?
- Where did these limits come from?
- Kill.
- Hurt their loved ones.
- Act dishonorably.
- Apologize.
- Eat green eggs and ham.
Core Motivators
Several years ago I took an Engineering Management class which really dug into the concepts of motivation and teamwork. One of the theories discussed in the class stated that people's core motivations can be broken down into three categories:- Power
- Prestige
- Approval
Examples
Now that I've detailed the basic processes on how to dig into a character to see who they are and what makes them operate, it's time to take a look at a few examples to see all the pieces together. I've provided a set of three below, one each for the different core motivators, so you can see the effect this has on the characters themselves. Please note that some answers are more detailed than others. You don't need to ask all the questions for every character, only to consider what feels most useful to you for that specific character until you feel they have the level of depth required for their current role. (I recommend one or two levels deeper than the level you intend to show your reader). If that role expands later you can always ask them more questions.Shane Lawrence
Loving father and power-seeking bastardWhat does he want: Shane wants to build a better life for Jake.
Why? Results: He doesn't want anyone to have a childhood like his, losing their parents to the wars and growing up in the orphanage. He feels responsible for Jake because of the repercussions of his own past choices and their negative impact on Jake. He recognizes his flaws and is trying to be better but has trouble overcoming his past habits.
What won't he do? Why? Very little, but...
- He won't hurt kids (because each time he sees kids hurt by the war he sees himself, and due to his past choices he sees himself as a part of that war no matter what changes he makes now)
- He won't lie (because he has been manipulated and lied to much of his life, plus he has realized the truth is more powerful anyway) but this doesn't mean he always tells the whole truth
- As awful as he can be sometimes he will not leave people broken if he feels responsible for their well being (because he recognizes his flaws, knows he is part of the problem, and is trying to do and be better).
Jake Cartwright Lawrence
Motivated visionary and prestige seekerMotivation: He is absolutely behind the mission of the Mordena, but his interpretation is different than his father's: protect the weak from the strong who would try to take advantage of them. This manifests as protecting the Freehold planets from being conquered by the other factions.
Why? Results: This is something he's always done with his father. It's very much a family activity at this point. He saw all the things his father is capable of doing, and witnessed the way his father completely changed when faced with the choice to protect Jake or to stay on his old path. His father protected him and made sure nobody ever hurt him and he wants to be strong like his father and protect people like he was protected.
What won't he do? Why? Jake has a much firmer moral core than his father, courtesy of his mother's influence and his father's openness about his own struggles. Jake won't hurt people unless they are trying to hurt those he cares about. He won't betray anyone who has placed their trust in him. He won't tolerate betrayal of the cause from anyone. These are all things he learned from his father and he's taken them to heart.
He Needs: PRESTIGE. He wants to be recognized as a protector, as just as good as his father. He has always had power at his fingertips, from his father and the Mordena, and so doesn't feel the need to seek it. He wants acceptance from his people but recognizes he will need to make decisions people won't agree with and that doesn't bother him; he learned early on to stand up to his father and their disagreements always worked themselves out. Likewise he's never needed to seek approval, his father always made sure he knew exactly where he stood and so while he wants to be recognized as following in his father's footsteps he does not need his father's approval, he's always had it.
Daoff Asul
Dedicated father, in need of acceptanceMotivation: To keep his family safe.
Why? Results: Family is the core of who Daoff is. His parents encouraged him to do great things, but the core of everything they did was not on the things but the love and time spent with family. They were highly successful in the Legion and yet always made time for him and his needs. He wants to carry this forward.
What won't he do? Why? Daoff will not jeopardize anyone else's family because family is everything, even when it's not his own.
He Needs: APPROVAL. He enjoys the prestige of being good at what he does mechanically but he is drawn more to the people he is working with and doesn't care who takes the official credit for the work in the end as long as his contributions are appreciated by the team. He doesn't want power, but will seek it out if he feels his family needs it. He loves children because they mean family, and their innocent adoration motivates him to help them achieve their needs and desires for fun by sharing his own childhood experiences with them.
Concluding Summary
I hope these thoughts help you when writing your own characters! As a summary, the basic tools I use when developing characters:- Motivation - What does this character want? OR How does this character interact with my main characters? / Why do I want them in my story?
- Why? - Keep asking your answers why until you feel you have built enough depth.
- What won't they do? - What limitations have they chosen to place on themselves, and why?
- Core Motivators - Which do they desire the most: Power, Prestige, or Acceptance?
The method of digging deeper via why is so simple, and I knew it, but sometimes its hard to remind yourself how to do it right. I'd never seen it explained so succinctly to me. So, thank you! :)
You're welcome! I do hope it helps!
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