The Great War
The Legion calls, and I respond. In war, a soldier's connections all fall away. The only things left are his shield, his weapons, and his fellow Legionnaires.
Introduction
The Corruption of Fraore
The Blood Gate
Gormul
Demonic Advancement
Mariliths are seen as great tacticians, as well as military commanders who have a deep-seated love for violence.
The Balor is one of the most dreaded creatures of the land, as well as the Abyss. In a military setting, they are cunning generals who hold their horde in check simply by being present.
Battles of the Great War
– The Battle of Pelghast: The Legion quickly overtook the remains of the attacking force sent after Pelghast, slaughtering them over the ruins of the Broken City.
– The Stormlands Skirmish: Every battle that took place in the Stormlands is considered part of the "Stormlands Skirmish". The enviornment here was a very rocky, hostile environment, full of treacherous slopes made all the more dangerous from constant rainfall.
– The Battle of the Blood Gate: The final battle of the Great War, this battle is characterized by the Legion's assault through the valley of Fraore right up to, and through, the Blood Gate. This battle ended with the retreat of the Legion, as well as the Great Cataclysm.
Belligerents
Strength
- Organized
- Disciplined
- Well-Trained
- Well-Equipped
- Loyal
- Limitless Soldiers
- Brute strength
- Variety in species
- Boundless Savagery
Casualties
- Zardon
- Most of the demons killed did not truly die, as they reform in The Abyss when killed outside of their home dimension*.
- *The demons killed in the Great Cataclysm were permanently destroyed
Objectives
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Unfortunately, I had to skim through the last few paragraphs due to time constraint, but this was a very interesting read! A lot of detail and still very clear. I'd suggest you take a look at the formatting, especially for the first part (when the sidebar is present) I appreciate that it isn't a huge textwall, but it felt a bit hard to know what was a completely new subject and what was linked to the information beside it. A quick description under the images would also help someone like me who isn't familiar with your world ^^. Is the fortnite supposed to be 24 days in your world, or is it a typo? I like how you break up the information with quotes, makes it feel more personal! I don't think I have many comments content-wise, felt like you got everything in that I need to know to understand what happened. One last thing is I really like the idea of the cataclysm being such a big event they start counting the years from then. Overall a really good job d=(^^ )Z
Oh I hadn't thought about the calendar discrepancy. In-world a week is 12 days, making a fortnight (2 weeks) 24 days. I'll add some clarification on that, as well as put in some captions for the images, as well as some other clarifications. Thanks for the feedback!