Jerna's Diary, entry 294.
Drama time. I was walking with Little L, just chilling as we followed a river down a valley, and then I heard some roar. I though, eh, it probably won't
find me, but literally as I turned around I saw about 10 dragons staring at me. I picked up Little L, and started pacing down the valley. Some of the
dragons started following me, which is when I started running. I starting running faster and faster, and I even grabbed a spare firestick from Little L's
compartment as I was running, and threw it down behind me. I heard the explosion, but I think I just made the dragons even more angry. Anyways, I kept on
running and then I noticed a few houses. I ran as fast as I could to the houses, and as soon as I reached one I broke down the door and hid in there, as
the dragons patrolled the house for a good half an hour. Not very fun. When the dragons left, I realised that this village might've been abandoned, as
I saw absolutely nobody outside. But as I thought that some man came out from a small room in the house, and started screaming at me. I'm talking curses
upon curses, throwing pebbles at me, and he just kicked me out of the house. I could barely understand anything he was saying, but I suspect they're
used to these dragons and are mad that I dragged a whole bunch of them to the village.
Overall this article has a nice layout and it's a fun read. Good work. The text kind of alternates between being very clearly narrated by Jerna and more generic descriptions. I think it might be better to lean more into Jerna's narration, especially in the introduction. It helps set the tone for people new to your world. Like, I don't know, something like; Ridge Valley is a large settlement within Cavern Quarry, a famed island in the Southern Archipelago. Ridge Valley leads the world in deaths by ridge runners, a medium-sized species of Earth dragons. You'd think they'd have some understanding of being chased by dragons, but I was told I could never return ever again. Oh well! I also get a horizontal scroll on Jerna's diary entry, which made it a bit hard to read.