Written by Tarkol, vocals and character of "Kerplunk Kerplonk" by Hasteful. A tale told by
Kerplunk Kerplonk to
Silas. Below are the reflections of Silas, with various notes made by scholars and students of the University who have been tasked with "fact checking" him.
I like the idea explored in the spoiler that the tale about the Kerplink is exaggerated (just like it would happen to most of the tales). The addition of the ballad by Kerplunk is also a great idea. It would be nice to know some detail about how Kerplink accomplished bringing the three races together and keep them together, maybe even write about little conflicts they had, that Kerplink managed to resolve. It would be also a nice addition to include the course of the battle between the ogres and The Army of Undermountain. Did they win just by overwhelming the enemy with their numbers or did they use some strategies and traps to defeat the ogres?
When I come back to do some revisions I'll expand a bit on the actual battle between the two factions, pitting the Army of Undermountain as a heavily disadvantaged underdog of course :) Thank you for your feedback!