Victor's Wing
Officially known as the Vermin Extermination Squad (VES), this union of municipal sanitation employees is charged with ensuring the enforcement of the Edict of Principle demanding the extermination of Winged Sand Foxes as vermin within Central Tilth's bubble wall.
In truth, they are secretly dedicated to helping wild sand foxes safely escape the city's confines, giving aid and comfort to injured sand foxes, and reuniting domestic sand foxes to the discreet safety of their human companions.
The complex structure of the Edicts that govern how the people and municipality interact means that when people complain about the incompetency of the VES, the Ruling Caste must devote additional resources to the Squad. These resources are, of course, monetary and are immediately applied to the hiring and training of new people.
Each recruit is hand-selected by a veteran member of the VES. They are chosen for their commitment to duty and their shared belief in the value of upholding the principles and motives of the VES. This is reflected in the oath they swear upon successful completion of their training certification challenge, which binds them to the health and welfare of the city's population and ecology.
The Worldbuilder's Note
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