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R5gina67
Rachael Dixon
14 Dec, 2019 08:36

Terrifying, do you mind if I create a character for this setting?

14 Dec, 2019 13:03

Not at all! This is meant to be an RPG setting anyway so feel free! :)

Author of prize-winning RPG settings Dark Shadows and Cinders of the Cataclysm. Designer of the narratively focused Celenia D10 RPG System.
R5gina67
Rachael Dixon
23 Jun, 2020 18:38

I created a Kuna Corporate negotiator who is charming,logical,but a bundle of nerves around germs.

23 Jun, 2020 21:44

That sounds surprisingly accurate for the setting, tbh. xD Nice work!

Author of prize-winning RPG settings Dark Shadows and Cinders of the Cataclysm. Designer of the narratively focused Celenia D10 RPG System.
Sage Dylonishere123
R. Dylon Elder
19 Dec, 2019 03:03

Love this one as well. Its a great take on the idea, reminding me much of tyranids, the flood, necromorphs, and other classic baddies but setting itself apart in sooooo many ways.   Before I begin, I found this "The Processor began its existance as the Hive Mind of the Shadebeast of the Shadow Realm." I wondered if you meant "Shadebeasts" but missed adding the S. Apart from that i didnt notice anythin as far as errors go!   Now immediately i was struck by the image. Its horrifying and i love it! It is has a hint of blur as the cover, but its slight. As I was reading I really enjoyed the fleshed out backstory. (get it) You have a well though out sequence of events here. Even though im not yet familiar to understand every term used, i still understood the progression from this hive mind to the formless blob to the processor.   Again we see that motivation driven by belief. I love that it cant even comprehend individuality. it adds an unexpected layer of depth to the processor which is needed in such a terrifying antagonist (i assume)   Also this description     "It is most often just a sea of flesh, limbs and bodies, partially mashed together, horribly disfigured and mutated in varying states of amalgamation as the Processor tirelessly works to incorporate all the flesh into the Mass" Thats a lovely description. i just wanted to say it. lol     It abilities are equally horrific. This is not something you want to come face to face with, and the idea of fighting it is just hopeless. Its like a cosmic horror and the worst of it is that it is seemingly impossible to beat it with what i know of the world. That would mean that on a long enough timeline, it is going to win.... thats a scary thought.   Well done as always. I will have to take a more focused read of the stainless concord to understand more about how it works overall. Will do so tomorrow, cause it seems like this would make an excellent endgame style of villain, my favorite kind!

Sage Dylonishere123
R. Dylon Elder
19 Dec, 2019 17:16

Also thanks the notification. I could have sworn I liked it. so sorry

19 Dec, 2019 20:10

xD That's not why I did the notification. I expanded the "Capabilities" section a bit on the primary feature of the Processor: It's compulsion field.   But thank you :)

Author of prize-winning RPG settings Dark Shadows and Cinders of the Cataclysm. Designer of the narratively focused Celenia D10 RPG System.
Sage Dylonishere123
R. Dylon Elder
19 Dec, 2019 21:02

Oops, no lol I was just happy you did it. Did not mean to imply. The fault was my own. XD Steel Concord coming soon. work was busy today

Journeyman Sloqush
Sloqush the Sloqush
6 Jun, 2020 15:25

Praise the Mass, I absolutely love this. Great (flesh)work :D

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