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Eldritch Elected

Leader of Aslana

The Eldritch Elected is one of the Aslanians who has been elected by the Eldritch Court, the leading group elected by the educated. They have many checks and balances with the court, but in times of war or crises, the Elected has more power than the Court.

Qualifications

No specific qualifications needed.

Requirements

They need to be at least 200 and born in the kingdom. Race doesn't matter, but if they are Human, they need to be at least 30, and have a counselor of at least 200 years of age.

Appointment

Needs to be elected by the Eldritch Court and approved by the Council of Corranil.

Duties

  • Keeping nationality high
  • Teaching the next Elected anything they might need to know about the other rulers of the islands

Responsibilities

  • Judging high-class crimes where the death penalty is possible
  • Approving or vetoing new laws the Court passes
  • Dealing in diplomatic matters with other nations

Benefits

The Elected lives a good life, without regarding the stress, but they can eat well, get paid well, and when their term(s) finish they are well respected, and may become one of the Courtiers.

Accoutrements & Equipment

May receive a special symbol of their authority, be it a crown, a ring, a robe, or anything. They may then keep it when their term(s) end and wear it whenever they want, for no one symbol of the elected will be the same, and only the current one will be recognized as having any power.

Grounds for Removal/Dismissal

If all of the court unanimously agrees that the Elected is corrupt, then they may dismiss them to be tried and elect a new temporary one. The old Elected is then tried by the Council of Corranil. If they are deemed corrupt, then they are sentenced to a punishment, to be determined by the new Elected, once their position becomes permanent.
Type
Civic, Political
Status
Current
Creation
Created sometime during the Formless Era
Alternative Naming
The Elected, Elected
Source of Authority
The vote of the court, and the Council.
Length of Term
100 Years, or until death. Can be reelected up to 3 times (400 years overall)
Current Holders

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Sep 7, 2018 02:01

I liked the general curtness: You said what you needed and didn't over-elaborate on everything. (In general, that's one of my weaknesses). However, a question about the duties: "keeping nationality high" is generally pretty vague, and abstract. "Teaching the new Elected" is only applicable to the Elected. So I'm unsure if you should make new duties, or maybe clarify the first one, but right now it looks like they're not very powerful, and given that you haven't specified that they control a military of any sort, they look very much like a glorified ambassador.

Sep 7, 2018 08:23

Nice use of all the template headers! :D  

They need to be at least 200 and born in the kingdom. Race doesn't matter, but if they are Human, they need to be at least 30, and have a counselor of at least 200 years of age.
  This sentence is a little confusing. They need to be 200, unless they're human in which case they need to be only 30, but not sure what the last bit means. You could move the age bit for humans to the section where age is discussed, and what does the "have a counselor for at least 200 years of age" mean?  
Keeping nationality high
  What does that mean? :)  
If all of the court unanimously agrees that the Elected is corrupt
  How is corrupt defined?


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Sep 7, 2018 13:26

What is considered corrupt by the council? Also I'm not sure what "keeping nationality high" means. And are there any benefits of being a councillor in specific? The benefits you have listed are pretty vague and could be attributed to any well paying job. The article is very precise, but could use elaboration in places.