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Author's Notes

A big thank you to Dani and TJ Trewin for helping figure out this one shot and to Angela Biscup for helping with the code for the glowy-border container!


Do you want to try a different kind of horny adventure? Check Knot for the faint of heart in Melior!  


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10 Apr, 2021 23:51

Oh.. oh my. The layout on this is absolutely stunning, by the way. You've done such a great job with it! I'm absolutely terrible at talking so I would be rubbish in this particular one shot, hahaha.   I really like the little sections about the npcs and the bit about safewords and consent. ^_^

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10 Apr, 2021 23:57

Hahahaha Emy, you are the best <3 I'm glad you enjoyed the sections about consent, I think they are important for any kind of ttrpg, be it a spicy one or a random generic dungeon crawler thingy.

11 Apr, 2021 01:08

You have SO much talent! I love how this came out, and I love the amount of thought that's gone into crafting all the pieces, lore and character-wise, for the GM in guiding the session. ("I just find the music they make very soothing" indeed.) Nicely done!

12 Apr, 2021 14:48

Thank you Dani! I'm glad you liked it, and thank you a million times for giving me the idea for it <3 I would have been stuck for days trying to think of something otherwise!

11 Apr, 2021 01:23

Naelin, you are amazing. This is beautiful. It looks like so much fun! (And I am probably not brave enough to play it. :p) I loved reading this.

Author of Fillimet, bright fantasy land of possibilities, and Vazdimet, its darker spacefaring future.
13 Apr, 2021 00:52

Thank you Solar!! It made me feel oddly proud when you said that you would never play it but still loved it hahaha <3

13 Apr, 2021 02:27

It was a very *ahem* enjoyable read.

Author of Fillimet, bright fantasy land of possibilities, and Vazdimet, its darker spacefaring future.
11 Apr, 2021 07:04

Ok, now it is published and I will leave you the public comment (you really didn't think I was done with that, did you?). Apart from the stunning layout and styling, apart from story that is simple enough to be adapted to other settings, apart from your writing style in handling erotic themes, I am in love with all of the characters. You portrayed them all so vividly in such little neat snippets. I really appreciate that, the way you designed this adventure, it allows for re-plays. Because I, for one, can't decide which of them I want to seduce first ;)

13 Apr, 2021 01:59

Thank you Krossss <3 <3 <3 I am so glad you liked the snippets! I am quite happy with both the "The Adjective Substantive" NPC cards and the more in-depth band member descriptions and I'm glad to know they also look good to others <3   PD: I still can't belive i didn't catch that sentence about Divina when I wrote it lol

11 Apr, 2021 22:32

Oh, Nae... this one shot is so freaking amazing!!! The design, the characters, the scenes! I loved it so much! Wow, you're so talented.

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14 Apr, 2021 01:24

Thank you Meluuu <3 So glad you liked it <3

Grandmaster Soulwing
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11 Apr, 2021 23:02

This one shot is wonderfully paced out out and beautifully coded. I enjoyed reading the plot and the characters descriptions. I believe that this could be very fun in the right group. ^^   (In all honesty, poor GM, who has, depending on the parties success to flirt and describe making out with all of them. I never played in a TTRPG before, but I guess that could end badly if the players take stuff personally)

14 Apr, 2021 01:29

Thank you so much! And yes, I think this is not a one-shot for every group, and I would definitely not play it with strangers. That's also why I put so much emphasis on communication and safety measures! But in all honesty, I think with the right group of sufficiently dirty/kinky minded sex-positive friends it could amount to a lot of light-hearted fun.

16 Apr, 2021 22:12

The layout here is just absolutely amazing. The boxes throughout were very nice to look at making the article an easy read! I really like how you included some tips for the communication for this oneshot, nicely done.   I think it was well written and the npc's were varied and had nice backgrounds. The concept of the erotic music was interesting as well. Nice article!

Feel free to check out my costume entry. :)
30 Apr, 2021 14:10

As always, fantastic work. The usage of symbols, intricate layout and way to fill out space, use of color and detail are amazing. I'm definitely finding a way to work both this, and "Knot for the Faint of Heart" into my world at some point as a way to ease tension. Pun intended.

I'd love to see your own opinions on my main world, Xardia, and it's Free D&D 5e Module!
8 May, 2021 23:47

Thank you very much, Heart! I'm glad you liked the layout, I think it's one of my best ones to date. We would love to know if you end up using these two one-shots one day!