Cliffwallow Marshlands
Full of bounty, but only for those willing to work.
Elrik had been wandering in this damned endless swamp for three days now, and his fresh water supply was running low; he'd tried to drink from the abundant tributaries surrounding him, but he was still too close to the coast and all the water was brackish. "Why did I have to wind up in this hellscape..," he murmured rhetorically to himself, wincing as he gripped his wounded left side. Elrik had been on a ship sailing to the desert of Northern Alfurstad when they were caught in a voidstorm and marooned in a place called the Cliffwallow Marshlands. He'd been separated from the rest of the crew and was trying to find his way to whatever this place might have in the way of civilization, but wasn't having any luck. *snap* What was that? Somewhere off to his right the brush moved.... Elrik readied his blade and slowly approached the suspicious area. Before he knew what was going on, rows of sharp teeth and slimy skin were launching out of the water at his face. He attempted to raise his sword in defense, but knew it was too late. The large jaws snapped shut, but not around his head; opening his eyes again he saw the closed jaws mere inches from his face. The reptilian snout was clamped shut by a pair of faintly glowing vines that had seemingly come from nowhere, and as he inspected the rest of the crocodilian creature before him, he noticed that its hind quarters were also bound by similar vines. Elrik heard a chuckle behind him and whipped around to face the newcomer, but lowered his blade when he realized this being was the source of his salvation. Standing before him was a rather petite yet muscular woman. She had pointed ears and somewhat angular features like that of an elf, but her olive grey-green skin was unlike any he had seen before, almost as if she'd materialized out of the swamp they were both standing in. She did not appear particularly old, but her skin was weathered from what must be a harsh life in these lands, so he could not be sure of her age. Her hands, one above her head and one outstretched in front of her, glowed with the same faint energy that emanated from the vines; this was all the proof Elrik needed to know that she had just saved his life from... whatever that thing was. "Come," she beckoned, "my vines won't hold that beast forever, and it doesn't look like you're in any shape to handle her when she gets loose." "Should we not kill it?" Elrik questioned as he readied his sword to deliver a killing blow. "For what, defending her territory from a strange creature? No no no, we will go our separate ways peacefully." She retorted as she turned and walked off into the mist, "welcome to The Marsh...."
On the northeastern coast of the continent of Alfurstad, isolated from the rest of the land by the fork of the Serpent's Tongue mountains, lies the Cliffwallow Marshlands. "The Marsh," as it's often called by its hardy denizens, the Swamp Elves , is shrouded in a layer of mist brought about by the area's low elevation and humid climate. To descend from the surrounding mountains and penetrate said mist is to discover a land of rich biodiversity and harsh survivalism; a place where the strong survive and the wise thrive.
Mmm, marshes. I liked the read and it sounds like a neat place I would love to see expanded on. :) Some notes and questions! Who lives here? You mentioned its hardy denizens, but no information about who lives there, what they're like or how they get around the issue of drinkable water and such. That'd be real cool to know more about! As an extension on that, I imagine you could write something real awesome about how the salt-industry looks like (and I bet the competition between boilers/dryers is cutthroat, too :) ) On a formatting note; maybe add another line break between last sentence and next header, to spread things out a bit more.
Creator of Araea, Megacorpolis, and many others.
Vince Napolitano
When I wrote the article for the contest I wasn't 100% sure yet who I would have as the primary denizens of the area, but I have decided on swamp elves and will be adding a bit of detail to this article, as well as linking to the article about the elves. As for the salt, I'm a cook so I had to keep myself from going into too much detail on that topic in this article. As I get closer to finishing the contest, I will see how my word limit is looking and go back to add more detail, though even if nothing more about the alfsalt makes it into this article, you can be sure that it will eventually have an article of its own! I agree on the formatting, I've been fooling around with it for a while and that's a good observation. Thanks for your comments.
Looking forward to seeing that, then. :)
Creator of Araea, Megacorpolis, and many others.