Burdened Mind
My father was a good and gentle father, an amazing leader, and a fearless pirate. But there were times when that god-like image I had of him would crack and the man would peak through. Screams of terror in the middle of the night from nightmare visions I'm not even sure he told our mother about. Fearful darting eyes and shaking hands if a large dog got too close. Bottles of expensive wine polished off on a weekly basis. Moments at night where my siblings and I would stumble upon him and mother sitting on the balcony at night where he would be shaking and she would be holding him. And of course there was his steadfast refusal to go outside without something covering his back.
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Sufferers can also experience difficulty managing their emotions, causing them to swing wildly from intense anger to deep sadness to almost manic joy. The person may also experience an increase in anxiety, causing them to become overly stressed by or obsessed over minor inconveniences or possible adverse outcomes.
An interesting article, although I feel it could use some research/clarification. I really liked how you opened the article with a quote/chapter excerpt of someone who witnessed what it's like to suffer the condition According to the text, burned mind occurs "any time a person is put in a life threatening situation where they have to kill or be killed their mind becomes weighted after." However, if this disease is like PTSD in real life, it won't affect any person whenever they are in a life-threatening situation (or see others go through it). Rather everyone will experience the fear and stress at the moment, but not everyone will develop a condition afterwards. Stylistically, while the distinction between a proper fight and a fight in the back of the alley was interesting and should definitely stay there, in this other sentence the specificity of "an alley" as the placed where you see someone get attached doesn't really help the text in my opinion Rather, the importance in this sentence is that you can get burned mind from witnessing a traumatic event to someone else ("Others acquire a burdened mind by witnessing a violent or traumatic event like seeing someone attacked in an alley"). Finally, the formatting could use another quote or image along the later paragraphs to break up the text and keep the reader engaged. I was also not a fan of the very long sidebar of related articles, I think it'd be best to keep it at the same length of the main text. Overall, I liked the inclusion of PTSD in pirate society. I was quite intrigued by that last sentence of burn minded people being handed off to rune casters for study. I wish you went into more detail, but I understand if it is there just to intrigue the readers.
Thank you for your feedback! I will definitely add some more stuff to and refine the article after summer camp is over. Part of the reason I didn't go into detail with rune casters is that I'm still working on the history for them as well, so I am hesitant to add concrete examples until I have figured out at least an outline for them.