The Fall of Ol Raxia Valley Storyline
The fall of Ol Raxia tells the tale of the last days of the valley. As a ritual that is used to seal the gateway to the realm of chaos is performed every ten years is in preparation. Dhaigham chooses to let his apprentice lead the ritual knowing that there are reasons she might be unfit to take part in the ritual.
Once the night of the ritual takes place, something goes wrong and the gateway shatters allowing for a rift to the realm of chaos to form and the creatures of that realm to enter the valley. This leads to many dying to these creatures as they do what they can to save who they can. In the end Nevarr takes the blame for the event and will end up imprisoned for the crime of using forbidden magic.
Plot points/Scenes
Act 1: The Sense of Dread
Act 1 focuses on the sense of dread that follows Nevarr as she goes through her days leading up to the ritual she is suppose to take part in.Prologue: The Dream of Haven
Nevarr has a dream of the fall of haven that haunts her to this day.Act 2: The Shattering
The Ritual takes place and goes horribly wrong leading to the shattering of reality causing those who took part having to find some way to fix what is broken.Act 3: The Sealing of the Rift
Nevarr sacrifices all she can to seal the rift with the aid of Mingan. Only to be labeled a sinner for having a hand in the shattering.Structure
Exposition
Introduce Nevarr and the other characters as they interact and prepare for the ritual. Explain a bit of Nevarr's past along with the history of the valley that she calls home. Showcase the relationships between the different characters.
Components
Goals
The Original Goal:
The Original goal was to perform he ritual to maintain the seals on the gateway to prevents a rift from forming.
The New Goal:
The New goal was to seal the rift and prevent the shattering from consuming the whole valley and beyond.Relations
Protagonists
Nevarr ov Talion
Mingan ov Flowza
Allies
Dhaigham Niolota
Maheegan ov Flowza
Adversaries
Phelan ov Flowza
Backdrops
Locations
Threats
Plot type
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