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Phrases such as "PACT OF PUDDING" and "MAXIMISE SUGAR" are big-strong and I love it. This article is fun and informative in all the best ways. You did a great job, Sloqush.
It certainly was a fun article to write, so I am glad to hear that you enjoyed reading it :D
I came here, captivated from the pudding image. I leave here, disturbed. Suspicious of my own sweet tooth. Fantastic ideas and very well written!
Fascinating magic system! As usual, I love all the names you gave to each section and the unrelenting hailstorm of puns that bombarded me. You definitely have your own voice and character you give to your articles. I have a clear vision of how this system works. The idea of sugar-induced magic is so cool. You described its applications in great detail. The only thing I would like to see is at least one example of how candy battles look like. A quote/sidebar section about a specific spell could go a long way in making the magic feel real. But yeah, awesome article!
Let us unite against the enemies of Album!
Angela Biscup
Sloqush
Great to hear that :D Funnily enough, imagining them as toddlers is actually not that far from the truth, as Sycian Sorcerers are essentially the "Magical Girls" of my world. Though they are far less the Sailor Moon type of Magical Girl and more the Puella Magi Madoka Magica type if you get my drift.