The Core of Gravity
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I'm super excited about this one as it begins the series of my cores, which is pretty much the main bulk of my magic system. I don't know how well I'll be able to push out these articles, but this feels like a good beginning. Let me know your thoughts below!
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"either be assigned to join an military unit or work transport jobs based on their rank." Found a little one here. It should be A military unit I think. If i remember "am" is used when the next word has a vowel sound. I am very intrigued by the similarities of viti and ondi. I love how they are intereconected and how they kind of mirror real world analogues, like bending space-time, and particles bound together to make bigger particles, on a quantum scale. It seems that's what your going for and I really like how the "physics" of this system are connected. Smart to make them military as well. It makes sense. They are powerful, and relatively plentiful. Oooo harmonics are cool. They function like spells but Oof. Lots of applications. I like how their are specific spells dealing with fixed points, pushing and pulling to an external point as opposed to yourself. Excellent idea and I can definitely tell what you meant when you said it's more versatile. Well done.
Yep. Silly typos. I'm also interested in it as some things, namely the ability to attract objects to each other, will be similar on a surface level but Ondi will also be able to create equal attraction between objects due to its different methodology. That, and I plan on making it possible for Ondi to have the ability to deconstruct and reconstruct objects down to a sub-atomic level. Granted, this won't be practically used to a fine level because, based on my idea, they would need an adept understanding of atomic structure to do so. But, they will be able to disintigrate things by "unbonding" them, as the name suggests. It was mostly because I didn't know what else to do with people capable of tearing cities from the ground by completely negating gravity(of course, that's only 100/60 000 000 people). Harmonics are the smallest unit. For clarification, I decided to divide Resonance up into "castable units". Resonance can be broken down into 7 Cores. Each of these 7 Cores can be broken down into between 3 and 12 Harmonics. Which can be built into different groups. It felt like a logical progression for me. Plus, it makes it more manageable to learn if you only learn 1 harmonic group at a time. (Maybe I should call Harmonic groups Chords to continue with the theme of sound in my terminology). Thanks for the feedback!
Ooooo yes, I do that with my magic systems as well. I like progression. It's a wonderful idea. O.O does that mean Ondi could unintentionally, or maybe intentionally, create nuclear explosions?
Oh gosh. I'd need to look further into the science behind nuclear weaponry. However, from what I just googled, they'd be able to creative devastating amounts of fall out if they mixed the wrong atoms together. They could even get explosions from the rapid release of energy between atomic particles (Which they, theoretically, would also be able to negate through the use of Resonance). However, nuclear explosions are based on the instability of nuclear elements being fused together. Which would require elements that the people of my world wouldn't have easy access too. Conclusion: yes, but no. They can create explosions, if they know what subatomic particles are, but that'd be difficult to manage and it wouldn't be nuclear.
I'm not adept at the science myself. I just know an atom was split lol hmmm... fusion tho... perhaps fusion should be very double. Idk. Either way an excellent addition to the world.