"Another human type creature like yourself but better" gotta admit, that made me laugh out loud. Gole is so blunt and I love it.     Well done, man. I dont really have any questions and that's a good thing. You express alot of idea here with the story and I dont feel lost or too confused. What I dont know I trust will be explained later and that is a hard balance to strike when writing a story. Excellent work. I like trouse and gole as characters as well. They bounce off of each other quite well. I also commend you for the way you include action on top of the dialogue. That's a surprisingly rare trait.